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Globalization has changed the world and made it economically interconnected.

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Globalization has changed the world and made it economically interconnected. So a firm can have its headquarters in the US while manufacturing facilities in China and it's back-office in India. This has enabled firms to take advantage of lower labor costs and increase production. Further, such a situation has also created wealth and China has seen its rise from a poor country to the second biggest economy in the world. The increase in wealth and job opportunities created by such huge industrial complexes consequently given rise to urbanization. An increase in the population of cities and the rise in wealth has created a demand for automobiles. In Asian countries, a car is considered a status symbol but above that poor transportation facilities have also created a huge demand for 2-wheeler and 4-wheeler automobiles in the emerging economies. The emerging economies such as India and Brazil do not have proper infrastructure and poor management at the strategic level means the urban cities are clogged with pollution from the vehicles and roads are filled with automobiles. The government has a major role to play in this situation. One of the first steps is to create a network of an efficient public transport system. The evidence suggests that many people in Indian cities forced to used automobiles because those cities don't have any public mass transportation system. Such a transportation system should be financed by raising taxes on fossil fuel usage and also by raising the cost of ownership of vehicles through parking charges and annual tax. The government should also increase the interest rate on vehcle loan by introducing a premium such as 'Green Premium'.
Globalization has
changed
the world and made it
economically
interconnected.
So
a firm can have its headquarters in the US while manufacturing facilities in China and it's back-office in India. This has enabled firms to take advantage of lower labor costs and
increase
production.
Further
, such a situation has
also
created
wealth and China has
seen
its rise from a poor country to the second biggest economy in the world.

The
increase
in wealth and job opportunities
created
by such huge industrial complexes
consequently
given
rise to urbanization. An
increase
in the population of
cities
and the rise in wealth has
created
a demand for automobiles. In Asian countries, a car
is considered
a status symbol
but
above that poor transportation facilities have
also
created
a huge demand for 2-wheeler and 4-wheeler automobiles in the emerging economies. The emerging economies such as India and Brazil do not have proper infrastructure and poor management at the strategic level means the urban
cities
are clogged
with pollution from the vehicles and roads
are filled
with automobiles.

The
government
has a major role to play in this situation. One of the
first
steps is to create a network of an efficient public transport system. The evidence suggests that
many
people
in Indian
cities
forced to
used
automobiles
because
those
cities
don't have any public mass transportation system. Such a transportation system should
be financed
by raising taxes on fossil fuel usage and
also
by raising the cost of ownership of vehicles through parking charges and annual tax. The
government
should
also
increase
the interest rate on
vehcle
loan by introducing a premium such as 'Green Premium'.
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IELTS essay Globalization has changed the world and made it economically interconnected.

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  American English
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273 words
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