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In today's era, globalization has a strong influence on countries around the world in many ways such as culture, technology as well as industries such as economics, politics and this also has a significant impact. to the resources of many businesses. In order for an organization to grow and prosper, people are the key to paving the way for a business to reach its goals and achieve its mission. Therefore, organizations need to positively increase employee productivity. But in the current globalization era, managing people always faces challenges. For businesses in Vietnam, it is not difficult to see that the company owns foreign employees and with cultural and human diversity, employee management is always an important issue existing in per organization.
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businesses. In order for an organization to grow and prosper,
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people
are the key to paving the way for a business to reach its goals and achieve its mission.
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, organizations need to
positively
increase employee productivity.
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in the
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current
globalization era, managing
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people
always faces challenges. For businesses in Vietnam, it is not difficult to
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see
that the
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company
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foreign employees and with cultural and human diversity, employee management is always an
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issue existing in per organization.
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IELTS essay globalization affects employee's performance

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
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