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Globalisation is it radiating the world of one culture and destroyed Nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In these days, globalisation have an impact on customs and identification debate going on. The method of globalisation of single 20 and finished other they have bad impression on the society. That is why, I fully agree with aspect. There are various issues you will do implementation on it. First and foremost, public will never accepted this; in fact, no Nation wants to do this, they have aware about this, if we follow him, then, we lost themselves and Nation wise and also look different from others. Secondly everyone loves their own culture and traditional values this concept damage them heavily. For instance, if America gives order all the countries follow their cultures and all of them are American. Due to this, it will created various problem for him reason is that they will snatched from them their own uniqueness background that shows them adverbs from them. From my own perspective, this idea is not good, due to fact already various type Nations have no more like Latin and Greek their cultures are no more. On contrast it is beneficial in one point that numerous cultures and languages if obsolete then one culture and one language help all the societies to become United but this is not possible. To conclude, single rule in world is against whole community that should not be done. I am not support, on one culture that is dangerous for ourselves and cultural values.
In these days,
globalisation
have an impact on customs and identification debate going on. The method of
globalisation
of single 20 and finished other they have
bad
impression on the society.
That is
why, I
fully
agree
with aspect. There are various issues you will do implementation on it.
First
and foremost, public will never
accepted
this; in fact, no Nation wants to do this, they have aware about this, if we follow him, then, we lost themselves and Nation wise and
also
look
different
from others.
Secondly
everyone
loves
their
own
culture
and traditional values this concept damage them
heavily
.
For instance
, if America gives order all the countries follow their
cultures
and all of them are American. Due to this, it will
created
various problem for him reason is that they will
snatched
from them their
own
uniqueness background that
shows
them adverbs from them. From my
own
perspective, this
idea
is not
good
, due to fact already various type Nations have no more like Latin and Greek their
cultures
are no more. On
contrast it
is beneficial in one point that numerous
cultures
and languages if obsolete then one
culture
and one language
help
all the societies to become United
but
this is not possible.
To conclude
, single
rule
in world is against whole community that should not
be done
. I am not support, on one
culture
that is
dangerous
for ourselves and cultural values.
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IELTS essay Globalisation is it radiating the world of one culture and destroyed Nation.

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