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Global warming is the most serious threat to mankind

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Global warming is the most serious threat to mankind’s existence, that’s why numerous amounts of people says that, it’s posing more threat than a nuclear war. However, humanity’s biggest threat is themselves, humans are the main culprit of the warming of the planet, therefore this essay will discuss about global warming and the danger it poses against us. A number of people argue that global warming is a natural occurring event, that happens once in every 25302 thousand years. However, research conducted by “Nature Protection Team” in 2015 suggests that it is too rapid to be a natural occurring event, due to the fact that icy regions are melting far too quickly, sea levels are rising, crops are dying and toxic substances in our atmosphere are increasing mostly due to Green House Effect. Green House Effect is briefly, trapping of the sun's warmth in a planet's lower atmosphere. This occurs when the air pollution that we produced traps the sun’s radiation, thus not letting the heat out when it should, this results the warming of the planet. In 2020, about 68 million tons of air pollution were emitted into the atmosphere in the United States. That’s enough pollution to kill thousands of adults in an instant. However, that is merely scratching the surface, there are numerous other countries that dwarves USA in emitting toxic gas, as such as India and China. This accelerates global warming even further. A research done by Harvard University shows that, if global temperature increase by only 2 degrees Celsius, it can lead to perilous crises such as famine, drought, tsunamis and plenty more. In conclusion, Global warming has put mankind into a grave situation. If we don’t do anything to reduce about Green House effect, it will lead to catastrophic events, moreover extinction of humanity.
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Global
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warming
is the most serious threat to mankind’s existence, that’s why numerous amounts of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
says that, it’s posing more threat than a nuclear war.
However
, humanity’s biggest threat is themselves, humans are the main culprit of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
warming
of the planet,
therefore
this essay will discuss about
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global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
warming
and the
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danger
it poses against us.

A number of
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people
argue that
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global
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warming
is a natural occurring
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event
, that happens once in every 25302 thousand years.
However
, research conducted by “Nature Protection Team” in 2015 suggests that it is too rapid to be a natural occurring
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event
, due to the fact that icy regions are melting far too
quickly
, sea levels are rising, crops are dying and toxic substances in our atmosphere are increasing
mostly
due to Green
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House
Effect.

Green
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House
Effect is
briefly
, trapping of the sun's warmth in a planet's lower atmosphere. This occurs when the air pollution that we produced traps the sun’s radiation,
thus
not letting the heat out when it should, this results the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
warming
of the planet. In 2020, about 68 million tons of air pollution
were emitted
into the atmosphere in the United States. That’s
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enough
pollution to kill thousands of adults in an instant.
However
,
that is
merely
scratching the surface, there are numerous other countries that dwarves USA in emitting toxic gas, as such as India and China. This accelerates
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global
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warming
even
further
. A research done by Harvard University
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shows
that, if
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global
temperature increase by
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only
2 degrees Celsius, it can lead to perilous crises such as famine, drought, tsunamis and
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plenty
more.

In conclusion
,
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Global
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warming
has put mankind into a grave situation. If we don’t do anything to
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reduce
about Green
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House
effect, it will lead to catastrophic
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events
,
moreover
extinction of humanity.
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IELTS essay Global warming is the most serious threat to mankind

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
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