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christmas foreign country

christmas foreign country EwoGr
I was really happy to receive from your letter. I hope you are doing well and I hope all your family is doing fine. In reply to your letter, I’m writing to answer some questions that you raised in your letter. It's great that you chose to celebrate Christmas in a foreign country for the first time in my country. I will wait and pick up you at the airpod before 1 hours. Don’t worry! Secondly, I watched the weather forecast on TV that It can very cold but no rain. In my opinion about clothing you should choose clothes that are thick and enough to cover your body. Do you like red clothes? My country has a dress code is red on Christmas. It symbolizes joy and luck. My writing is quite long. If you need to know anything else, just get in touch with me as you can. Have a safe flight. and I hope that we will have a memorable Christmas in my country. Give my best to everyone in the family.
I was
really
happy to receive from your letter. I hope you are doing well and I hope all your family is doing fine. In reply to your letter, I’m writing to answer
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questions that you raised in your letter. It's great that you chose to celebrate Christmas in a foreign
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country
for the
first
time in my
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country
. I will wait and pick up you at the
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airpod
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before
1 hours. Don’t worry!

Secondly
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watched
the weather forecast on TV that It can
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cold
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but
no rain. In my opinion about clothing you should choose clothes that are thick and
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enough
to cover your body. Do you like red clothes? My
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country
has a dress code
is red
on Christmas. It symbolizes joy and luck.

My writing is quite long. If you need to know anything else,
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just
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get
in touch with me as you can. Have a safe flight.
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and
I hope that we will have a memorable Christmas in my
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. Give my best to everyone in the family.
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IELTS essay christmas foreign country

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
175 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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