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Global warming is the biggest threat face by human in 21st century

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Nowadays, Global warming and climate changing is a serious issue and is not a single issue but a number of environmental issues. There are many problems link to this, however, this essay will discuss about the flooding of residence and the probable solutions to this. In the present time, global warming is the greatest threat to humanity. Rising seas are one of those climate change effects. Average sea levels have swelled over 8 inches (about 23 cm) since 1880, with about three of those inches gained in the last 25 years. Every year, the sea rises another 0, 13 inches (3, 2 mm). One of the highest problem of climate changing that worth mentioning is that it causes flooding people’s house and business. Needless to say, the raising sea level can make houses of many people under the water. For instance, Indonesia, that's known as an archipelago in Southeast Asia and also one of the candidates that projected to be below average annual coastal flood levels by 2050, has many houses along the coastal area so even some feet of change in the level of water could be catasthropic. Result in increase in seawater level causes many issues, people lose their property, assets and not to mention many become homeless. The possible solution to this is the government should build flood barriers such as flood stoppers like dams, floodgates to help reducing water level or waterway to prevent the effect of flood. Also the government should restrict people to build houses in the close around of the water. In addition to this, one of the problems that is the significances losing of agricultural land. People will unemployed if they lose their land. For a better example, most of the occupation in our country is farmed so land plays a very important role in our country’s life. Another practical solution is that they should should change their occupation that less risky to maintain their financial. Climate change not only causes calamity, it could also affect human health. Climate change can lead to mental health problems and stress-related disorders, asthma, respiratory allergies and airway diseases, and foodborne diseases and malnutrition. The major solutions to control global warming or climate changing are to reduce the use of carbon dioxide, methane and other harmful gases. Humans have to stop water wastes. We should reduce using a vehicle which needs fuels and start to drive electric vehicle or another vehicle that more environmentally friendly. Environmental pollution and population growth should be controlled. For example, population growth leads to more people and more people leads to more population. So, this could be the best solutions to this problem. All in all, climate changing causes many issues of human life. The world obviously is suffering the massive influence of global warming. Realizing this problems, many countries in over the world have had trend to be more environmentally friendly, to go green and being sustainable. However, it is my conviction that if steps are implemented efficiently, there is no doubt that our planet has been over the safe and worthy-living place. We have to work hard to control it in order to make a beautiful world.
Nowadays,
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Global
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warming
and
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climate
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changing
is a serious
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issue
and is not a single
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a number of environmental
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. There are
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problems
link to this,
however
, this essay will
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discuss about the
flooding of residence and the probable
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solutions
to this.

In the present time,
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global
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warming
is the greatest threat to humanity. Rising
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seas
are one of those
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climate
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change
effects. Average
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sea
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levels
have swelled over
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8 inches
(about 23 cm) since 1880, with about three of those inches gained in the last 25 years. Every year, the
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sea
rises another 0,
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13 inches (3, 2 mm)
.

One of the highest
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problem
of
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climate
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changing
that worth mentioning is that it
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flooding
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people’s
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house
and business. Needless to say, the raising
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sea
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level
can
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make
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houses
of
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many
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people
under the
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water
.
For instance
, Indonesia, that's known as an archipelago in Southeast Asia and
also
one of the candidates that projected to be below average annual coastal
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flood
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levels
by 2050, has
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many
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houses
along the coastal area
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so
even
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feet of
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change
in the
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level
of
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water
could be
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catasthropic
. Result in increase in seawater
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level
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causes
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many
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issues
,
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people
lose their property, assets and not to mention
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many
become homeless. The possible
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solution
to this is the
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government
should build
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barriers such as
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stoppers like dams, floodgates to
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help
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reducing
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level
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prevent
the effect of
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the
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in the close around of the water.

In addition
to this, one of the
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that is
the
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significances
losing of agricultural land.
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People
will unemployed if they lose their land. For a better example, most of the occupation in our country
is farmed
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so
land plays a
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important
role in our country’s life. Another practical
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solution
is that they
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should should
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change
their occupation that less risky to maintain their financial.

Climate
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change
not
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causes
calamity, it could
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change
can lead to mental health
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problems
and
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-related disorders, asthma, respiratory allergies and airway diseases, and foodborne diseases and malnutrition. The major
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solutions
to control
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global
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warming
or
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climate
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changing
are to
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reduce
the
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of carbon dioxide, methane and other harmful gases. Humans
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stop
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wastes. We should
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reduce
using a vehicle which needs fuels and
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to drive electric vehicle or another vehicle that more
environmentally
friendly. Environmental pollution and population growth should
be controlled
.
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, population growth leads to more
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and more
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people
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leads
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All in all,
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issues
of human life. The world
obviously
is suffering the massive influence of
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global
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warming
. Realizing
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this
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problems
,
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many
countries in over the world have had trend to be more
environmentally
friendly, to go green and being sustainable.
However
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are implemented
efficiently
, there is no doubt that our planet has been over the safe and worthy-living place. We
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have to
work
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IELTS essay Global warming is the biggest threat face by human in 21st century

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
528 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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