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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue v.2

Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue v. 2
In 21st century technnology is constantly increasing but the effect of it' s too adverse and it will be see in future. Global warming is one of the serious problem that is face by 21st century people. Global warning instigate the severe problem that is detrimental for human life as well as for the earth. The government should take some of the strick steps to ameliorate the situation of the global warning as well as individual has a responsibility to use eco-friendly things. Begin with the causes of global warning, The snow of the antarctica rigion is constantly melting down, due to this water is increasing in the sea. It will lead to be flood in the coastle areas. Due to the global warming the layer of Ozone was broken, so the earth tempereture is increasing. Also due to the temperature raises there are many human disease are produce. The ratio of the Co2 is increase as compare to other gases in the earth. Due to the global warming the natural beauty of the earth is deteriorate. Furthermore, to preclude the malicious effect of the global warming the responsibility of the individuals to use eco-friendly things. People should use less individual vahicles and use public transportation. People should reduce the use of plastic. People should not throw the plastic instead of again with the help of recycle alogorithms. Also the main species that effect on the global warming which are the CFC gases, so reduce the use of those machines that release the such type of gases in the environment. The government make a strict rules and regulation for people and encourage to the people for use the alternative of the fuel for example electric car, solar power plant for electricity. In conclusion, Global warming is the one of the danger problem, that humans are facing. If appropriate step are does not taken as soon as posible then we will ready to pay huge price for the environment. However, today people are more aware of this problem and helps to the government to solve out this problem.
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technnology
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constantly
increasing
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the effect of
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it&
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see
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in future
.
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Global
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warming
is one of the serious
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problem
that is
face by 21st century
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people
.
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Global
warning instigate the severe
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problem
that is
detrimental for human life
as well
as for the
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earth
. The
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government
should take
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some of the
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strick
steps to ameliorate the situation of the
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global
warning
as well
as individual has a responsibility to
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use
eco-friendly things.

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with the causes of
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global
warning, The snow of the
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antarctica
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rigion
is
constantly
melting down,
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due
to this water is increasing in the sea. It will lead to be flood in the
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coastle
areas.
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Due
to the
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global
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warming
the layer of Ozone
was broken
,
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so
the
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earth
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tempereture
is increasing.
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Also
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due
to the temperature raises there are
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many
human disease are produce. The ratio of the Co2 is increase as compare to other gases in the
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earth
.
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Due
to the
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global
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warming
the natural beauty of the
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earth
is
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deteriorate
.

Furthermore
, to preclude the malicious effect of the
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global
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warming
the responsibility of the individuals to
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use
eco-friendly things.
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People
should
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use
less individual
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vahicles
and
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use
public transportation.
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People
should
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reduce
the
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use
of plastic.
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People
should not throw the plastic
instead
of again with the
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help
of recycle
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alogorithms
.
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Also
the main species that effect on the
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global
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warming
which are the CFC gases,
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so
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reduce
the
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use
of those machines that release the such type of gases in the environment. The
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government
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make
a strict
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rules
and regulation for
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people
and encourage to the
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people
for
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use
the alternative of the fuel
for example
electric car, solar power plant for electricity.

In conclusion
,
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warming
is the one of the
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danger
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problem
, that humans are facing. If appropriate step are does not
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taken
as
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soon
as
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posible
then we will ready to pay huge price for the environment.

However
,
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today
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people
are more aware of this
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problem
and
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helps
to the
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government
to solve out this
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problem
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Mistakes

IELTS essay Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
347 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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