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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? v.3

Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? v. 3
The human role in catastrophic changes in the natural corruption of our world has been reached extreme levels since the beginning of the Industrial Age. Most people think that those changes in the nature are becoming the most severe problems for humankind. This essay will discuss why our planet is experiencing the global warming and provide some potential solution to minimize those effects on it. Many people and experts think the most topical issues in the causes of the global warming is the excessive use of fossil fuels. These sources account for the majority of the amount of energy generated from in most countries over the world. The result of overuse of them is that pollution in air by emitting large amounts of CO2, which in turn leads to increase in average air temperature which is called the Global Warming. Second major reason is deforestation. Nowadays, governments are exterminating trees, forests, rivers to use lands for building highways, constructing dams. This causes changes in the atmospheric balance, such as corruption of the nitrogen cycle, which has effects on the precipitation process and on the fertility of farm lands. The most important measure is to increase in the amount of energy produced from renewable sources, such as wind, solar power, and waste power. These type of sources provide a energy production process without any chemical contamination in land and air. Secondly, governments should educate people about the potential disasters of the Global Warming and make them aware of this problem. In conclusion, global warming is an issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future. Governments and individuals must face this issue with a realistic and solution-seeking perspective and steps should be taken on a war footing to protect our home.
The human role in catastrophic
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changes
in the natural corruption of our world has
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extreme levels since the beginning of the Industrial Age. Most
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people
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think
that those
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changes
in the nature are becoming the most severe problems for humankind. This essay will discuss why our planet is experiencing the
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global
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warming
and provide
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some
potential solution to minimize those effects on it.

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Many
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people
and experts
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think
the most topical issues in the causes of the
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global
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warming
is the excessive
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use
of fossil fuels. These sources account for the majority of the amount of energy generated from in most countries over the world. The result of overuse of them is that pollution in air by emitting large amounts of CO2, which in turn leads to increase in average air temperature which
is called
the
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Global
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Warming
. Second major reason is deforestation. Nowadays,
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governments
are exterminating trees, forests, rivers to
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use
lands for building highways, constructing dams. This causes
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changes
in the atmospheric balance, such as corruption of the nitrogen cycle, which has effects on the precipitation process and on the fertility of farm lands.

The most
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important
measure is to increase in the amount of energy produced from renewable sources, such as wind, solar power, and waste power. These type of sources provide
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energy production process without any chemical contamination in land and air.
Secondly
,
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governments
should educate
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people
about the potential disasters of the
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Warming
and
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make
them aware of this problem.

In conclusion
,
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global
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is an issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future.
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Governments
and individuals
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must
face this issue with a realistic and solution-seeking perspective and steps should
be taken
on a war footing to protect our home.
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IELTS essay Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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