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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem? v.8

Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem? v. 8
It is generally agreed today that global warming is one of the biggest issues facing humans. This essay will discuss how emission of carbon dioxide escalating the global temperature and following the use of energy efficient technology, which can help in tackling the addressed problem. The main reason behind climate change is the emission of carbon dioxide gas from the chimneys of industries and the engines of cars. In other words, burning of fossil fuels releases carbon into the atmosphere which help in increasing the earth temperature. Consequently, leads to the melting of ice caps, rising sea level and unwanted temperature variations. The global survey conducted by the scientists concluded that, the USA has major contribution in emission of harmful gases such as Nitrous oxide, Carbon dioxide over past few decades. The increasing rate of such cases is only due to the burning of gasoline at large extent. On the other hand, to eradicate the fundamental cause of global warming, the eco-friendly technology should be adopted by individuals as well as the government. The authorities should promote the use of renewable sources of energy such as, solar system, wind power plants, et cetera for energy generation and adaptation of the carbon free gas engines should be the responsibility of each individual of a country to eliminate the rise of temperatures. For instance, during corona virus lockdown, it has been observed that each and every individual and industry got quarantined, which indicates that the reduced use of motor vehicles and shut down of major industries for few weeks helped in combating the environmental pollution and decreased the level of carbon gas in the atmosphere, similarly the eco-friendly technology will help in reducing the impacts of environmental issues. In conclusion, global warming is increasing the environmental problems at an alarming rate. The major reason for the rise in temperature is because the emission of dangerous gases such as carbon, nitrogen et cetera. To handle this major issue the government and people should adopt environmental friendly technologies like, carbon free gas engines in cars and solar systems in industries.
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today
that
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global
warming is one of the biggest issues facing humans. This essay will discuss how
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emission
of
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carbon
dioxide escalating the
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global
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temperature
and following the
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use
of energy efficient
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technology
, which can
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help
in tackling the addressed problem.

The main reason behind climate
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change
is the
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emission
of
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carbon
dioxide
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gas
from the chimneys of
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industries
and the engines of cars.
In other words
, burning of fossil fuels releases
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carbon
into the atmosphere which
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help
in increasing the earth
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temperature
.
Consequently
, leads to the melting of ice caps, rising sea level and unwanted
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temperature
variations. The
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global
survey conducted by the scientists concluded that, the USA has
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major
contribution in
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emission
of harmful gases such as Nitrous oxide,
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Carbon
dioxide over past few decades. The increasing rate of such cases is
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only
due to the burning of gasoline at large extent.

On the other hand
, to eradicate the fundamental cause of
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global
warming, the eco-friendly
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technology
should
be adopted
by individuals
as well
as the
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government
. The authorities should promote the
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use
of renewable sources of energy such as, solar system, wind power plants,
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et cetera
for energy generation and adaptation of the
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carbon
free
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gas
engines should be the responsibility of each individual of a country to eliminate the rise of
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temperatures
.
For instance
, during
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corona virus
lockdown, it has
been observed
that each and every individual and
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industry
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got
quarantined, which indicates that the
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reduced
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use
of motor vehicles and shut down of
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major
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industries
for few weeks
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helped
in combating the
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environmental
pollution and decreased the level of
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carbon
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gas
in the atmosphere,
similarly
the eco-friendly
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technology
will
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help
in reducing the impacts of
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environmental
issues.

In conclusion
,
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global
warming is increasing the
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environmental
problems at an alarming rate. The
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major
reason for the rise in
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temperature
is
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because
the
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emission
of
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dangerous
gases such as
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carbon
, nitrogen
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et cetera
. To handle this
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major
issue the
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government
and
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people
should adopt
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environmental
friendly
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technologies
like,
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carbon
free
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gas
engines in cars and solar systems in
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industries
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
You can never understand one language until you understand at least two.
Geoffrey Willans

IELTS essay Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem? v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
346 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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