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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21th centuary and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rate .What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions

Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21th centuary and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rate. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions Jgy6
In the current scenario, it is being witnessed that ocean levels are rising up dramatically owing to the rise in atmospheric temperatures, which is a matter of grave concern. This essay discusses the repercussions caused by increasing sea levels and suggests some key remedies to combat this challenge. One threatening impact of upsurging hiking sea level, driven by global warming is that the environment is damaged because of some potential effects. As a result, there are alots of harmful gases blow from factories and industries which leads to threat the environment at alarming rate. Moreover, the another fact is that the increasing atmospheric temperature. As a result, flood are more increasing and it is inundate is everything. It leads to people becoming homeless. Either people loose their properties as well as alots of casualities will occur. For example a news published in the newspaper "The Turbine "this news is revealed that Tsunami occurred in Japan in 2011 a great deal of aquatic animals as well as humans were dragged to death casualities. In order to tackle this issue, there is a need to address the problem is that it is a responsibility of government they should construct the flood barriers. It leads to prohibited the extra water. Further more, authorities should encourage people that they did not to build their houses near coastal regions. They migrate to another places, which are far away to ocean so that if floods and Tsunami be occurred then they save their lives and houses. Summing up, undoubtly it can be said that global warming causes various problems such as Tsunami and floods more increasing yet government should build the flood gates to control the extra water which helps to save the life of their people.
In the
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current
scenario, it is
being witnessed
that ocean levels are rising up
dramatically
owing to the rise in atmospheric temperatures, which is a matter of grave concern. This essay discusses the repercussions caused by
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increasing
sea levels and suggests
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some
key remedies to combat this challenge.

One threatening impact of upsurging hiking sea level, driven by global warming is that the environment
is damaged
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because
of
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some
potential effects.
As a result
, there
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are alots
of harmful gases blow from factories and industries which leads to threat the environment at alarming rate.
Moreover
, the another fact is that the
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increasing
atmospheric temperature.
As a result
,
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flood
are more
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increasing
and it is
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inundate
is everything. It leads to
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people
becoming homeless.
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Either
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people
Did you mean "lose" (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
loose
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their
properties
as well
as
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alots
of
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casualities
will occur.
For example
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a news
published in the newspaper
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"
The Turbine
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"
this news
is revealed
that Tsunami occurred in Japan in 2011 a great deal of aquatic animals
as well
as humans
were dragged
to death
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casualities
.

In order to tackle this issue, there is a need to address the problem is that it is a responsibility of
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government
they should construct the
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flood
barriers. It leads to prohibited the extra water.
Further
more, authorities should encourage
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people
that they did not to build their
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houses
near coastal regions. They migrate to another places, which are far away to ocean
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so
that if
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floods
and Tsunami
be occurred
then they save their
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lives
and
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houses
.

Summing up,
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undoubtly
it can
be said
that global warming causes various problems such as Tsunami and
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floods
more
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increasing
yet
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government
should build the
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flood
gates to control the extra water which
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helps
to save the life of their
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people
.
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IELTS essay Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21th centuary and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rate. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6.0
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