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Global warming is one of the biggest threat to our environment . What are the causes of Global Warming? What steps can be taken to tackle this issue?

Global warming is one of the biggest threat to our environment. What are the causes of Global Warming? What steps can be taken to tackle this issue? wx1Dl
Global warming means, the earth is getting warmer day by day. This affects every human, animal and plant on the globe. Global warming has become the most dreadful threat to the environment. This essay intends to discuss various causes and steps that should be followed to curb this dire issue in the forecoming paragraphs before reaching the conclusion. To commence with, there are plethora of causes which give rise to this issue. The first and foremost cause is aviation. To elaborate this, the fuel that is emitted by the aeroplane leads to the air pollution. This deplete the Ozone layer, it is the layer which protect the Earth from harmful UV rays. This depletion of Ozone allows the harmful rays to enter the Earth, which makes it hotter day by day. Another cause is deforestation. To explain this, people are knocking down a large number of trees. This process reduce the downpours which give rise to soil erosion too. Moreover, the level of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is rising rapidly because there are less number of trees left to produce oxygen. Another major reason is industrialisation. To go in detail, the gases which are emitted by factories and vehicles are very harmful which give rise to the pollution and temperature. Due to this increase, glaciers also melts by which the sea level raises to the great extent which is great cause of floods. There are plausible steps to tackle the issue to some extent. The major step is afforestation. In detail, more and more trees should be planted by the public so that the level of pollution could be decreased to some extent. Moreover, government should organise various programs to aware the public about planting trees. Another step is to encourage Public transport. People should use the public transport instead of personal vehicles, it would lead to a control in pollution, thus reducing global warming. To conclude, this problem cannot be curbed properly but some measures can be taken to mitigate this dire problem which could bring a good future.
Global warming means, the earth is getting warmer day by day. This affects every human, animal and plant on the globe. Global warming has become the most dreadful threat to the environment. This essay intends to discuss various
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causes
and
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steps
that should
be followed
to curb this dire issue in the
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forecoming
paragraphs
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before
reaching the conclusion. To commence with, there are plethora of
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causes
which give rise to this issue. The
first
and foremost
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cause
is aviation. To elaborate this, the fuel that
is emitted
by the
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aeroplane
leads to the air
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pollution
.
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This deplete
the Ozone layer, it is the layer which protect the Earth from harmful UV rays. This depletion of Ozone
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allows
the harmful rays to enter the Earth, which
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makes
it hotter day by day. Another
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cause
is deforestation. To
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explain
this,
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people
are knocking down
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a large number of
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trees
. This process
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reduce
the downpours which give rise to soil erosion too.
Moreover
, the level of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is rising
rapidly
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because
there are less number of
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trees
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left
to produce oxygen. Another major reason is
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industrialisation
. To go in detail, the gases which
are emitted
by factories and vehicles are
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very
harmful which give rise to the
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pollution
and temperature. Due to this increase, glaciers
also
melts by which the sea level raises to the great extent which is great
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cause
of floods. There are plausible
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steps
to tackle the issue to
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some
extent. The major
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step
is afforestation. In detail, more and more
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trees
should
be planted
by the
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public
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so
that the level of
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pollution
could
be decreased
to
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some
extent.
Moreover
,
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government
should
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organise
various programs to aware the
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public
about planting
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trees
. Another
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step
is to encourage
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Public
transport.
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People
should
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use
the
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public
transport
instead
of personal vehicles, it would lead to a control in
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pollution
,
thus
reducing global warming.
To conclude
, this problem cannot
be curbed
properly
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but
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some
measures can
be taken
to mitigate this dire problem which could bring a
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good
future.
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IELTS essay Global warming is one of the biggest threat to our environment. What are the causes of Global Warming? What steps can be taken to tackle this issue?

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