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advantages and disadnatages going to abroad to study

advantages and disadnatages going to abroad to study pJdx2
in my opinion, all of us may experience the majority of hardships or downhill and difficulties in our mother town which can force us to shore off our country and go to another different country to live our study. when we go to other foreign cities the citizens might see us refugees or anonymous people and might not treat or behave us in a nice way. if we want to go to another country as an international or foreign student it would be easier for us if we can get the scholarships or funds. although in any case, we will face and deal with many sorts of problems. firstly we should fly the nest and say farewell to our families and beloved friends and try to stand on our foot and be on our own. second, it's about our budget and our financial situation that can put us in great danger so we should pull our fingers out and stretch every nerve to find a job and gain money as much as we can and don't afraid to take risks because nothing venture nothin gain so you can never say it. but it has although have some advantages such as it can teach you a lot of things because when you are a lone wolf and experience solitary it can make you gallant and courageous. mind you you will meet and recognize so many people and count them as your companion and it will open so many new doors and opportunities for you. on the whole please be precise to choose and a thing what you want and then apply for university unless you want to play a losing battle. may your life works like a magic
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my opinion, all of us may experience the majority of hardships or downhill and difficulties in our mother town which can force us to shore off our country and go to another
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different
country to
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live
our study.
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when
we go to other foreign cities the citizens might
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see
us refugees or anonymous
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people
and might not treat or behave us
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in a nice way
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if
we want to go to another country as an international or foreign student it would be easier for us if we can
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get
the scholarships or funds.
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although
in any case, we will face and deal with
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many
sorts of problems.
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firstly
we should
fly
the nest and say farewell to our families and beloved friends and try to stand on our foot and be on our
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own
.
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second
, it's about our budget and our financial situation that can put us in great
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danger
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so
we should pull our fingers out and stretch every nerve to find a job and gain money as much as we can and don't afraid to take
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risks
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because
nothing venture
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nothin gain
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you can never say it.
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advantages such as it can teach you
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a lot of
things
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because
when you are a lone wolf and experience solitary it can
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make
you gallant and courageous.
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mind
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you you
will
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meet
and recognize
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so
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many
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people
and count them as your companion and it will open
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so
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many
new doors and opportunities for you.
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on
the whole
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please
be precise to choose and a thing what you want and then apply for university unless you want to play a losing battle.
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may
your life works like a
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magic
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IELTS essay advantages and disadnatages going to abroad to study

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
286 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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