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Small scale vs large scale Business

Small scale vs large scale Business nNa6K
Business is another word for making money in a legalised and social manner there are usually large scale and small scale businesses in the world. Even small scale business is not everybody's cup of tea as it requires a lot of tactics and managing skills to tackle the manpower and the money spent on this small scale setup. Organising the schedule of the workers under us control and maintaining the the quantity as well as quality of your product with well in time delivery will be the best way for advertising your business rather than spending money on another wayouts like social media and newspapers exactra your satisfied clients will be your best advertisers if you provide them good product qualitatively as well as quantitatively as compared to the market prices Treating the customer in a a very respectful manner is another key factor for upliftment of one's business and taking it to next Higher level. However in the large scale business people usually take loans from banks and some reputed financial organisations and become shareholders in already running high profile companies to make money in a quick manner but there is a lot of risk involved in it as if one is unable to return the loan well in time the business can fizzle out in a very small period of time so one should be very careful while making some heavy investments in large scale business rather should take very expert advice before spending any amount of money in the such business.
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is another word for making
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money
in a
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legalised
and social manner there are
usually
large
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scale
and
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small
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scale
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businesses
in the world.

Even
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small
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scale
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business
is not everybody's cup of tea as it requires
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a lot of
tactics and managing
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skills
to tackle the manpower and the
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money
spent on this
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small
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scale
setup.

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Organising
the schedule of the workers under us control and maintaining
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the the
quantity as
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well
as quality of your product with
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well
in time delivery will be the best way for advertising your
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business
rather
than spending
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money
on another
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wayouts
like social media and newspapers
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exactra
your satisfied clients will be your best advertisers if you provide them
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good
product
qualitatively
as
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well
as
quantitatively
as compared to the market prices Treating the customer in
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a a
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very
respectful manner is another key factor for
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upliftment
of one's
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business
and taking it to
next
Higher level.

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However
in the large
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scale
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business
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people
usually
take loans from banks and
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some
reputed financial
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organisations
and become shareholders in already running high profile
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companies
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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money
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in a quick manner
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but
there is
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a lot of
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risk
involved in it as if one is unable to return the loan
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well
in time the
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business
can fizzle out in a
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very
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small
period of time
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so
one should be
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very
careful while making
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some
heavy investments in large
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scale
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business
rather
should take
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very
expert advice
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before
spending any amount of
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money
in the such
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business
.
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IELTS essay Small scale vs large scale Business

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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