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It is better to save money than spend it

It is better to save money than spend it 1nDly
In contemporary times, the number of citizens may prone to financial issues which regularly take place daily. Therefore, it is argued that storing a great deal of income is better than we use up it. It seems to me that saving money can bring many benefits in our lives, however, the most important thing is that you have an equilibration in your life. On the one hand, stinting cash is the pivotal objective to prepare for spontaneous circumstances in the future. It is an undeniable fact that many risks may happen to our lives, which we are not able to predict previously. Simultaneously, the risk is almost addressed by property. Take the example of, it is unfortunate that the health problems suddenly occur to us without unexpected. From this point, some funds in reserve will spend for situations in treatment. Secondly, almost all residents will devise the plans which purchase house or car, even for their children. All of the plans aim to settle down in our life. Hence, they need to be hard-working without consuming property too much to carry out their plan swiftly. Finally, when there is an imbalance between savings and shelling out of the people, the whole world is indirectly affected. The economic downturn of 2008 as a result of this negligence. The crisis was caused by over-dropping and not enough income. Many economists say on this issue: "that an emphasis on sensible husbandry should be a universal strategy to avoid the recurrence of such events soon. " I do appreciate that some people think differently, saying that it is better to live for the moment they into folk over accordingly. While some daily squandering is essential, of course, I feel this is a potentially unwise viewpoint, especially considering recent global events. you can lavish rhino on vacations, nights out with friends when you have devoted hard and disparaged a decent amount of your finance. Inflation will make your property worthless if you keep it in an economic account. The rate of inflation fluctuates around 1%-2. 4% annually. Interest rates for cheeseparings accounts are around 0. 6%, if you want to increase your profits (with the relative risk of course), you can Try Saving Money as an Investor Instead Of a Consumer. so you can expend to enjoy life when you want to do it because you are unique. I could give you all the advice in the world on how to spare estate, but it will never make a difference if your income never increases. Instead of trying to budget your way to wealth, focus on boosting your income instead. In general, the reason we earn funds is that we need to manipulate them. And I think Different people will have different opinions, for me, it will be a reasonable balance of spending so that you are not passive because of anything.
In contemporary times, the number of citizens may prone to financial issues which
regularly
take place daily.
Therefore
, it
is argued
that storing a great deal of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
income
is better than we
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use
up it. It seems to me that saving money can bring
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many
benefits in our
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lives
,
however
, the most
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important
thing is that you have an
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equilibration
in your life.

On the one hand, stinting cash is the pivotal objective to prepare for spontaneous circumstances in the future. It is an undeniable fact that
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risks
may happen to our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
, which we are not able to predict previously.
Simultaneously
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
is almost addressed by property. Take the example of, it is unfortunate that the health problems
suddenly
occur to us without unexpected. From this point,
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some
funds in reserve will spend for situations in treatment.
Secondly
, almost all residents will devise the plans which
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purchase
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house
or car, even for their children.
Consider using "all the".
All of the
plans aim to settle down in our life.
Hence
, they need to be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
-working without consuming property too much to carry out their plan
swiftly
.
Finally
, when there is an imbalance between savings and shelling out of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, the whole world is
indirectly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
. The economic downturn of 2008
as a result
of this negligence. The crisis
was caused
by over-dropping and not
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enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
income
.
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Many
economists say on this issue:
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"
that an emphasis on sensible husbandry should be a universal strategy to avoid the recurrence of such
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events
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soon
.
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"


I do appreciate that
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some
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people
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think
differently
, saying that it is better to
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live
for the moment they into folk over
accordingly
. While
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some
daily squandering is essential,
of course
, I feel this is a
potentially
unwise viewpoint,
especially
considering recent global
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
.
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you
can lavish rhino on vacations, nights out with friends when you have devoted
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
and disparaged a decent amount of your finance. Inflation will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
your property worthless if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
it in an economic account. The rate of inflation fluctuates around 1%-2. 4%
annually
. Interest rates for
Possible spelling mistake found.
cheeseparings
accounts are around 0. 6%, if you want to increase your profits (with the relative
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
of course
), you can Try Saving Money as an Investor
Instead
Of a Consumer.
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so
you can expend to enjoy life when you want to do it
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because
you are unique.

I could give you all the advice in the world on how to spare estate,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it will never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a difference if your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
income
never increases.
Instead
of trying to budget your way to wealth, focus on boosting your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
income
instead
.
In general
, the reason we earn funds is that we need to manipulate them. And I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Different
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will have
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different
opinions, for me, it will be a reasonable balance of spending
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so
that you are not passive
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of anything.
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IELTS essay It is better to save money than spend it

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
477 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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