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Should children be taught in school to give speeches and presentations?

Should children be taught in school to give speeches and presentations? dkRoP
Comparing to the past, nowadays schools and collages are consistently including extracurricular activities for growing children, making them skillful. Speeches and presentations are on of them. further, we will present why they are essential, what is the use of these in their real life and how these can be beneficial in terms of better future and so on. The significance of both of these from my point of is it assits in bulding confidence it is scientifically proved that even a shy, nervous child feels confident after giving the speeches and it also helps to the hesitation. moreover it makes individual smarter than before. Because to prepare the presentations a stundents have to think, plan and the most important on is the execution so this activity covers all the three main aspects. As well as, the some other reasons why teachers prefer it, as if student have strong desire to become a businessman or teacher for instance they require these kind of skills, so a person would need to learn these as early as possible, that is why it must be taught in schools, the organizations which provide these facilities are considered to be the preferred ones by the parents. At last, i would like to suggest these educational agencies, companies, organizations, government, teachers etc. about do not only focus on these 2, however, these are the one of the main activities but they should try innovative solutions for the improvents of the children from each and every aspect.
Comparing to the past, nowadays schools and collages are
consistently
including extracurricular activities for growing children, making them skillful. Speeches and presentations are on of them.
further
, we will present why they are essential, what is the
use
of these in their real life and how these can be beneficial in terms of better future and
so
on.

The significance of both of these from my point of is it
assits
in
bulding
confidence it is
scientifically
proved that even a shy, nervous child feels confident after giving the speeches and it
also
helps
to the hesitation.
moreover
it
makes
individual smarter than
before
.
Because
to prepare the presentations a
stundents
have to
think
, plan and the most
important
on is the execution
so
this activity covers all the three main aspects.

As well
as, the
some
other reasons why teachers prefer it, as if student have strong desire to become a businessman or teacher
for instance
they require
these kind
of
skills
,
so
a person would need to learn these as early as possible,
that is
why it
must
be taught
in schools, the organizations which provide these facilities
are considered
to be the preferred ones by the parents.

At last,
i
would like to suggest these educational agencies,
companies
, organizations,
government
, teachers etc. about do not
only
focus on these 2,
however
, these are the one of the main activities
but
they should try innovative solutions for the
improvents
of the children from each and every aspect.
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IELTS essay Should children be taught in school to give speeches and presentations?

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