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Global environmental issues are the responsibility of richer nations, not poorer ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Global environmental issues are the responsibility of richer nations, not poorer ones. EyjB
Due to the rising of nation environmental issues, people often pinpoint that developed nation have hand on this to happen. This essay disagree this view and agrees this is due to the people all around the world not being concerned about the nature. Firstly, Nature are being exploited by humans in a way that it is becoming hard for environment to survive. Moreover, people are not paying enough attention to the effect that it can cause when the environment is mishandled. Instead of people uniting together and taking action to amilorate the surroundings people are busy blaming at each other. In so called rich nations they uses environmental resources in such a way that it cannot be forgiven by mother nature. The growing population in rich society has often lead to occupy the half of the forest area. There is an increasing use of non-renewable energy in developed area then in any other part of the world, on top of that the pollution that they cause is in massive amount that the nature can hold of. For instance, statistics has shown that developed area has 70% of air pollution and unfiltered air and when breathing such contagious air can lead to serious health problem. Another point to consider is that people in poorer countries are not aware of the environment effect. They often cut trees for cooking purposes and for bulding wooden shelter made out of trees. Mainly, in rular area where they do not have taps in their homes rely on water bodies such as: lakes, river, ponds. When such water are overused, it will be polluted. In conclusion, all human beings of all classes of nation have harm environment directly or indirectly.
Due to the rising of
nation
environmental issues,
people
often
pinpoint that developed
nation
have hand on this to happen.
This essay disagree
this view and
agrees
this is due to the
people
all around the world not
being concerned
about the
nature
.
Firstly
,
Nature
are
being exploited
by humans in a way that it is becoming
hard
for
environment
to survive.
Moreover
,
people
are not paying
enough
attention to the effect that it can cause when the
environment
is mishandled
.
Instead
of
people
uniting together and taking action to
amilorate
the surroundings
people
are busy blaming at each other. In
so called
rich
nations
they
uses
environmental resources in such a way that it cannot
be forgiven
by mother
nature
. The growing population in rich society has
often
lead
to occupy the half of the forest
area
. There is an increasing
use
of non-renewable energy in developed
area
then in any other part of the world,
on top of that
the pollution that they cause is in massive amount that the
nature
can hold of.
For instance
, statistics has shown that developed
area
has 70% of air pollution and unfiltered air and when breathing such contagious air can lead to serious health problem. Another point to consider is that
people
in poorer countries are not aware of the
environment
effect. They
often
cut
trees for cooking purposes and for
bulding
wooden shelter made out of trees.
Mainly
, in
rular
area
where they do not have taps in their homes rely on water bodies such as: lakes, river, ponds. When such water
are overused
, it will
be polluted
.
In conclusion
, all human beings of all classes of
nation
have harm
environment
directly
or
indirectly
.
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IELTS essay Global environmental issues are the responsibility of richer nations, not poorer ones.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
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