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Global Environment Problems

Global Environment Problems G985x
In the recent times, there are huge problems that are affecting the environment. Such as, Pollution, corruption, Economy, Cost, Inflation etc. In general, there is a myth that by increasing the cost of the fuel the government think they can bring down the environment problems. How does it work? By Increasing the fuel cost, the economy of the country literally goes down. this is mainly because, the cost of living will increase tremendously as the transportation cost increases. Our county is one of the ancient country in the world. But variation of people living here are different.
In the recent times, there are huge problems that are affecting the environment. Such as, Pollution, corruption, Economy,
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Cost
, Inflation etc.
In general
, there is a myth that by increasing the
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cost
of the fuel the
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government
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think
they can bring down the environment problems. How does it work?

By Increasing the fuel
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cost
, the economy of the country
literally
goes down.
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this
is
mainly
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because
, the
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cost
of living will increase
tremendously
as the transportation
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cost
increases. Our county is one of the ancient country in the world.
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But
variation of
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people
living here are
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different
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IELTS essay Global Environment Problems

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
97 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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