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gjhkjl, mgrwghfrwujytenbhgwiuhgmhgteuj YLYVB
Firstly, If I see rude behavior or injustice toward females by males, I should change it with my hand s if I cann’t do it ishould to hate it with my heart and protest it, also I must to tell to others and motivate to be with me in one boat, and that’s is real power of storytelling and leadership and it will surely will develop social good life for the community. Secopnly, If malala didn’t tell about her story, how world would know the real situation of her country, many countries tries to show itself as a liberal socially good, however I am the citizen of UZB AND I KNOW WHATS GOING ON REALITY IF I CANN’T RAISE MY VOICE, HOW CAN OUR NATION’S GIRLS WILL DEVELOP, prosperity and enlarging the outlook of conservative community we need to elevate our voice it is vital for us, therefore now I am standing here for showing and telling real stories which is so crucial for me! ! ! . Thirdly, I will make best examples, from world- famous leaders and tell to learn more sources for public speaking in my youngerself! .
Firstly
, If I
see
rude behavior or injustice toward females by males, I should
change
it with my hand s if I
cann
’t do it
ishould
to hate it with my heart and protest it,
also
I
must to
tell
to others and motivate to be with me in one boat, and
that’s is
real power of storytelling and leadership and it will
surely
will develop social
good
life for the community.

Secopnly
, If
malala
didn’t
tell
about her story, how world would know the real situation of her country,
many
countries tries to
show
itself as a liberal
socially
good
,
however
I am the citizen of UZB AND I KNOW
WHATS
GOING ON REALITY IF I
CANN
’T RAISE MY VOICE, HOW CAN OUR NATION’S GIRLS WILL DEVELOP, prosperity and enlarging the outlook of conservative community we need to elevate our voice it is vital for us,
therefore
now
I am standing here for showing and telling real stories which is
so
crucial for me! ! !
.


Thirdly
, I will
make
best examples, from world-
famous
leaders and
tell
to learn
more sources for public speaking in my
youngerself
!
.
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IELTS essay gjhkjl, mgrwghfrwujytenbhgwiuhgmhgteuj

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
191 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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