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Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and relevant examples

Give your own opinion and relevant examples 1ndRW
Many people make friends through social sites and chat rooms. Others believe that it is not a good idea to make friends without meeting them face to face. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and relevant examples These days, social media over utilizing by human being, as a result some people found close friend from the network, but some people believe that to make friends without internet. As far as I am concerned I completely agree the second view. I will support my opinion with examples. It is true that, social networks are becoming popular among the people as a result most adults keen on virtual life, and also making friends on the internet this is bad. In other word, if someone took the friend from the internet However he or she completely do not know new friend's behaviour, life style, and and so on. He or she just converted by the social messenger. For instance, one of my close friends found one girl on the internet, when I was a saw her picture she looks life very beautiful but real life she is not. On the other hand, I agree with the view point is that to make friend in the real life. This is better as opposed to virtual friend. To be precise if someone found real friend, he or she can create face to face conversation with new friend, or meeting somewhere. Therefore real friend is better. As we have seen there is no easy answer to this question. On balance however, I tend to believe that real friend is better after sometime this friend will be close friend
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sites and chat rooms. Others believe that it is not a
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or disagree with this statement? Give your
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opinion and relevant
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examples


These days,
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media over utilizing by human being,
as a result
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found close
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from the network,
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without internet.
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far as I
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the second view. I will support my opinion with examples.

It is true that,
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networks are becoming popular among the
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people
as a result
most adults keen on virtual
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, and
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making
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on the internet this is
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. In other word, if someone took the
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from the internet
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he or she completely
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do
not know new friend's
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style,
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and and
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on. He or she
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converted by the
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messenger.
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, one of my close
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friends
found one girl on the internet, when I was a
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her picture she looks
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life
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very
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beautiful
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she is not.

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, I
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with the view point is that to
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in the
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. This is better
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opposed to virtual
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. To be precise if someone found
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, he or she can create
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conversation with new
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, or meeting somewhere.
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Therefore
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real
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is better.

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we have
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there is no easy answer to this question. On balance
however
, I tend to believe that
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is better after sometime this
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will be close
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friend
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IELTS essay Give your own opinion and relevant examples

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
277 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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