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My name is Cagatay. I am 24 years old. I was born and grew up in Izmir city. I was lived 20 years in Izmir. I was lived 20 years in Izmir. I have a small family. I have a mother, father, and brother, them live in Izmir. I won a University in Mugla city and then I moved the Mugla in 2017. I studied Local Government for two years. I was a graduated associate degree and then I passed the bachelor's degree in Kutahya Dumplupınar University, Department of Political Science and International Relations. I study in there for two years. Also, I continue studying. I moved to Eskisehir then after Mugla. I going to every Thursday. I have a face-to-face lesson in every Thursday and online lessons in Wednesdays and Saturdays. I was worked somewhere this time, but now I am not working. I was started the IELTS exam and every Sunday I have an English Lesson. I hope next year in 2022, I am great speaker. Because I want to study Master's degree in Estonia. So, University wants to IELTS result minimum of 6. 0 points. I preparing the this exam.

My name is Possible spelling mistake found.Caraway
Cagatay
. I am 24 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. I was born
 and grew up in Izmir city. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 20 years in Izmir. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 20 years in Izmir. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 family. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have a mother, father, and brother, them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in Izmir. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 won a University in Possible spelling mistake found.Mug la
Mugla
 city and then I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 the Possible spelling mistake found.Mug la
Mugla
 in 2017. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 studied Local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 for two years. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was a graduated associate degree and then I passed the bachelor's degree in Possible spelling mistake found.UtahKathyTanyaCutawayUtahanKatya
Kutahya
Possible spelling mistake found.
Dumplupınar
 University, Department of Political Science and International Relations. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 study in there for two years. Also
, I continue studying. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to Possible spelling mistake found.
Eskisehir
 then after Possible spelling mistake found.Mug la
Mugla
. Did you mean "I'm going", "I am going", or "I was going"?I'm goingI am goingI was going
I going
 to every Thursday. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have a face-to-face lesson in every Thursday and online lessons in Wednesdays and Saturdays. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was worked
 somewhere this time, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am not working. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 the IELTS exam and every Sunday I have an English Lesson. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 in 2022, I Please check whether an article is missing: "am a great" or "am an great"am a greatam an great
am great
 speaker. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 I want to study Master's degree in Estonia. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, University wants to IELTS result minimum of 6. 0 points. Did you mean "I'm preparing", "I am preparing", or "I was preparing"?I'm preparingI am preparingI was preparing
I preparing
Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only "the" or "this" is left.thethis
the this
 exam. 