Give high unemployment rate, it is recommended that the government only provide primary education and no secondary education. What do you think? v.1
Give high unemployment rate, it is recommended that the government only provide primary education and no secondary education. What do you think? v. 1
Emphasizing on primary education can resolve the unemployment rate, which is advocated by some people. From my perspective, only giving primary erudition to citizens and taking them back to work will never increase the employment rate rather than many workers would drop out from companies due to the absence of higher secondary knowledge.
To begin with, primary erudition is the birthright of all, which provides basic knowledge to human begins who could survive in this blue and green ball with prime wisdom how to become socialized themselves. Despite the fact, people will not be able to hold their job position, since they have not any higher qualifications, which can earn by admitting in colleges and universities. This is because tertiary education uplifts the fundamental education of the young generation who would come to know various aspects of each side, such as science, art, and commerce. For example, in the primary level, children know how doing simple calculation like plus, minus, et Cetra. However, young people can learn deeper calculation of math that might help them in calculating the bank statement and other financial documents.
In contrast, if citizens take only an elementary education, they would not work efficiently in the job market. Furthermore, several employers want deeper insight of the selected activity from any candidates. If they discover that employees possess simply basic knowledge, eventually, they could fire them from jobs. For instance, these days, especially, in software companies, whatever the exact criteria of the human resource team wants from the applicant, if it is not output in their works, they do not hesitate to kick those employees out. Thus, for gaining higher knowledge of some topics, higher erudition is necessary.
In conclusion, the suggestion for governments is that they should provide only primary education to increase high employment rates. In my opinion, it is not a good idea, because having a higher certificate from tertiary proves the better quality of the candidate for the desired post.
Emphasizing on
primary
education
can resolve the unemployment rate, which
is advocated
by
some
people
. From my perspective,
only
giving
primary
erudition to citizens and taking them back to work will never increase the employment rate
rather
than
many
workers would drop out from
companies
due to the absence of higher secondary knowledge.
To
begin
with,
primary
erudition is the birthright of all, which provides basic knowledge to human
begins
who could survive in this blue and green ball with prime wisdom how to become socialized themselves. Despite the fact,
people
will not be able to hold their job position, since they have not any higher qualifications, which can earn by admitting in colleges and universities. This is
because
tertiary
education
uplifts the fundamental
education
of the young generation who would
come
to know various aspects of each side, such as science, art, and commerce.
For example
, in the
primary
level, children know how doing simple calculation like plus, minus,
et
Cetra
.
However
, young
people
can learn deeper calculation of math that might
help
them in calculating the bank statement and other financial documents.
In contrast
, if citizens take
only
an elementary
education
, they would not work
efficiently
in the job market.
Furthermore
, several employers want deeper insight of the selected activity from any candidates. If they discover that employees possess
simply
basic knowledge,
eventually
, they could fire them from jobs.
For instance
, these days,
especially
, in software
companies
, whatever the exact criteria of the human resource team wants from the applicant, if it is not output in their works, they do not hesitate to kick those employees out.
Thus
, for gaining higher knowledge of
some
topics, higher erudition is necessary.
In conclusion
, the suggestion for
governments
is that they should provide
only
primary
education
to increase high employment rates. In my opinion, it is not a
good
idea
,
because
having a higher certificate from tertiary proves the better quality of the candidate for the desired post.
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