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gift, talk about a gift you gave someone recently

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i recently gave my younger brother a book as a graduation gif. the book is tittled "How to own the world" and It's on the topic of personal finance and investing. the reason i gave this to my younger brother is because its a book that i wish i had read earlier in my life. the book simply guides you on the best and sofest ways to invest your money, and one of the key points is to start investing as early a possible; ideally when you are in early twenties. thats why i gifted this book to my younger brother as he is only twenty one years old and just about to start his first job. to be honest, i felt quite proud to be able to share this book with my brother because i honestly think it will improve his life, financially speaking, which of course is really important. so yeah that's a gift that i have given someone recently.
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recently gave my younger
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book
as a graduation
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the world
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and It's on the topic of personal finance and investing.
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reason
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gave this to my younger
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that
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wish
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had read earlier in my life.
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book
simply
guides you on the best and
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ways to invest your money, and one of the key points is to
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investing as early a possible;
ideally
when you are in early twenties.
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why
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gifted this
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to my younger
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brother
as he is
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twenty one
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his
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be honest,
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felt quite proud to be able to share this
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with my
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brother
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because
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honestly
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it will
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his life,
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speaking, which
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IELTS essay gift, talk about a gift you gave someone recently

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
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