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geography condition of your country

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Basically, i live in Bangladesh it was stayed on Asia. Our countries people ditroyy m, any forest for their living purposse and it was the thing when the geographyaffects started. Because everyone went to rich for that reason many of our cultures are distroyed. manuy people who leaves in forest their not in here because the richest people made here many new l. . building. they cut the trees on this forest. many rivers are gonna filled up by soi
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people
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and it was the thing when the
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Because
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of our cultures are
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distroyed
.
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manuy
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people
who
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leaves
in forest their not in here
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because
the richest
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people
made here
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many
new l.
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building
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they
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cut
the trees on this forest.
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rivers are gonna filled up by
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IELTS essay geography condition of your country

Essay
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1 paragraphs
79 words
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