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Genetically modification trees

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The articles state that Genetic modification trees can have some advantages which help humanity to have more comfortable life otherwise The lecture explains some benefits and problems of genetic modification trees which can faced us with recondite problems and also faced us with not any problems. Firstly, the article states genetically modification tress give more fruits and it can grow faster than natural tress in a short time which help to the economy. As you know in lecture genetically modification trees have more resistant to the natural condition in plant life. For instance, consider a kind of climate change which should kill tress in a session condition but these kind of genetically modificated trees will be stable and instead of having walted flowers have fresh flowers so, they can hurt the environment eventually instead of winter we faced spring for along time. The second one is paying more money for genetically modificated trees while having trees in a usual condition doesn’t cost. Finally, these kind of trees with altered humanity will be so expensive that cause lack of trees in the environment due to its payment so just rich people can have trees in their home or their garden. The third problem is that the genetically modification trees are stronger than other trees so eventually inter to compete with the local wild trees and in resources. So, genetically modificated trees uses more nutrient that natural wild tress that it will be harmful for the plant environment.
The articles state that Genetic
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modification
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trees
can have
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some
advantages which
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help
humanity to have more comfortable life
otherwise
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explains
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some
benefits and problems of genetic
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modification
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trees
which can faced us with recondite problems and
also
faced us with not any problems.

Firstly
, the article states
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genetically
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modification
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tress
give more fruits and it can grow faster than natural
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tress
in a short time which
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help
to the economy.
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As
you know in lecture
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genetically
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modification
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trees
have more resistant to the natural condition in plant life.
For instance
, consider a kind of climate
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change
which should kill
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tress
in a session condition
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but
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these kind
of
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genetically
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modificated
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trees
will be stable and
instead
of having
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walted
flowers have fresh flowers
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so
, they can hurt the environment
eventually
instead
of winter we faced spring
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.

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genetically
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modificated
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trees
while having
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trees
in a usual condition doesn’t cost.
Finally
,
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these kind
of
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trees
with altered humanity will be
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expensive that cause lack of
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trees
in the environment due to its payment
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so
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just
rich
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people
can have
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trees
in their home or their garden.

The third problem is that the
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genetically
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modification
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trees
are stronger than other
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trees
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so
eventually
inter to compete with the local wild
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trees
and in resources.
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,
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genetically
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modificated
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trees
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more nutrient that natural wild
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tress
that it will be harmful for the plant environment.
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IELTS essay Genetically modification trees

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
246 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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