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overpopulation is increasing day by day in various urban area what are problem related to this and what could be possible solution

overpopulation is increasing day by day in various urban area what are problem related to this and what could be possible solution EpowQ
It is an irrefutable fact that, overpopulation is a biggest issue these days India and China are overpopulation Nations that always try different type of steps for overcome the population. overcrowdness is a dramatically climing at an alarming rate. This essay will first suggest that increasing demand for food and problems related to unemployment then increase food supply and government provide financial support for people most viable solution for this. To begin with, the significant problem of overpopulation is a demand of food. To elaborate it, if in any region have too much people living the population rate is climbing the contrary food conjunction sharply decreased. As a result, the individuals who faced poverty type of problems. However, every human want to better job to fulfill their dreams and demands but with overpopulation it is rigid to find job conveniently in their nation because corporation do not hire every person for employment. For instance, a recent survey of China showed that 79% of mass is based unemployment complication because of overpopulation. on the other hand, government should give financial assistance to multitudes and increase food supply. In other words, regime promote and appreciate personal skills of a people by providing some loans to open their own business in society and also planting crops of higher productivity that enhance the production of food supply which would help to reduce poverty type of complications. For epitome, a newspaper of New York showed that America is the one of the most foodsupply nation compared as to other countries because government also promote farmers to plant crops in wide range. In conclusion, overpopulation of the major problem but if government takes port to appreciate people to to start their own business it would definitely good step to tackle this type of problems.
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overpopulation
is
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a
biggest issue these days India and China are
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overpopulation
Nations that always try
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different
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type
of steps for overcome the population.
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overcrowdness
is a
dramatically
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climing
at an alarming rate. This essay will
first
suggest that increasing demand for
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food
and
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problems
related to unemployment then increase
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food
supply and
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government
provide financial support for
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people
most viable solution for this.

To
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begin
with, the significant
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problem
of
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overpopulation
is a demand of
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food
. To elaborate it, if in any region have too much
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people
living the population rate is climbing the contrary
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food
conjunction
sharply
decreased.
As a result
, the individuals who faced poverty
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type
of
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problems
.
However
, every human want to better job to fulfill their dreams and demands
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but
with
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overpopulation
it is rigid to find job
conveniently
in their nation
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because
corporation do not hire every person for employment.
For instance
, a recent survey of China
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showed
that 79% of mass
is based
unemployment complication
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because
of overpopulation.

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on
the other hand,
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government
should give financial assistance to multitudes and increase
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food
supply.
In other words
, regime promote and appreciate personal
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skills
of a
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people
by providing
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some
loans to open their
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own
business in society and
also
planting crops of higher productivity that enhance the production of
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food
supply which would
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help
to
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reduce
poverty
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type
of complications. For epitome, a newspaper of New York
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showed
that America is the one of the most
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foodsupply
nation compared as to other countries
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because
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government
also
promote farmers to plant crops in wide range.

In conclusion
,
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overpopulation
of the major
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problem
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but
if
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government
takes port to appreciate
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people
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to to
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start
their
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own
business it would definitely
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good
step to tackle this
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type
of
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problems
.
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IELTS essay overpopulation is increasing day by day in various urban area what are problem related to this and what could be possible solution

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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