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Furthermore, people who avoid amendments in their lives are introverts and have fewer friends. They like to remain alone and are scared of meeting new people

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IELTS essay Furthermore, people who avoid amendments in their lives are introverts and have fewer friends. They like to remain alone and are scared of meeting new people

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31 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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