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Friends kindness is your life

Friends kindness is your life A3LKw
Friends are essential in life. They are ready to help in any kind of trouble, whether you are in panic or depression. They will definitely guide in right way. They are like as our cousin. One day i was in trouble of some flocks in my town, nobody come to help me but one of my friend come and save my life among that flocks so friends are like as God. If you don't have best friends than your life will be full of trouble. It is important to have atleast one friend which help you in difficult conditions I'm your life.
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IELTS essay Friends kindness is your life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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