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Friends kindness is your life

Friends kindness is your life A3LKw
Friends are essential in life. They are ready to help in any kind of trouble, whether you are in panic or depression. They will definitely guide in right way. They are like as our cousin. One day i was in trouble of some flocks in my town, nobody come to help me but one of my friend come and save my life among that flocks so friends are like as God. If you don't have best friends than your life will be full of trouble. It is important to have atleast one friend which help you in difficult conditions I'm your life.
Friends
are essential in
life
. They are ready to
help
in any kind of trouble, whether you are in panic or depression. They will definitely guide in right way.
They
are like as our cousin. One day
i
was in trouble of
some
flocks in my town, nobody
come
to
help
me
but
one of my
friend
come
and save my
life
among that flocks
so
friends
are like as God.
If
you don't have best
friends
than your
life
will be full of trouble. It is
important
to have
atleast
one
friend
which
help
you in difficult conditions I'm your
life
.
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IELTS essay Friends kindness is your life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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