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Fresh water has become a golbal problem for the world. What are the causes of it? what meaaures government and individual should take to resolve to the problem? Give reasons and e. g for your answers v.1

Fresh water has become a golbal problem for the world. What are the causes of it? what meaaures government and individual should take to resolve to the problem? Give reasons and e. g for your answers v. 1
Fresh water has a world wide issue for the world. This essay will discuss the main cause of ended up fresh water due to water pollution and and industrilization. This essay suggest two main measure should be taken to prevent defoeatation and strict rule and regulation for installment of industries by government and individual. The world has been suffering from the burning issue of freah water one of the first problems of the increase industrilization and another problem that needs to be considered water pollution. The population rates and installment of day by day industry can badly effect our fresh water sources. For example the waste product of industry and homes are directly drained into fresh water river, oceans. This often results water become polluted and unable to drink and not uses in dishes. Moreover, in order to eradicated polluted water, A possible solution to tgis problems would be applied new laws and and strict rules for installement of new industries and prohabit deforeatation. Government and every individual have relised it, that if the installment of industries countinous at this rates they will ended up fresh water and deforestation will further exacerbate this issue. For example many industry and homes have no proper savage system and the polluted water too much, and neglacting purification as well as waste product directly drained into fresh water. Therefore in order to reduce and prevent water become polluted we must include a well purification and well developed savage system. In conclusion, fresh water become more and more polluted as a result of industrilization. This essay is discussed how water is polluted by induatrilization and deforeatation. This suggust that every measuer should be taken by government and individual that to keeps fresh water cleard.
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world wide
issue for the world. This essay will discuss the main cause of ended up
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fresh
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water
due to
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water
pollution
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and and
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industrilization
.
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This essay suggest
two main measure should
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to
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prevent
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defoeatation
and strict
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rule
and regulation for installment of
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industries
by
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government
and individual.

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freah
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water
one of the
first
problems of the increase
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industrilization
and another problem that needs to
be considered
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water
pollution. The population rates and installment of day by day
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industry
can
badly
effect our
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fresh
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water
sources.
For example
the waste product of
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industry
and homes are
directly
drained into
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fresh
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water
river, oceans. This
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often
results
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water
become
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polluted
and unable to drink and not
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uses
in dishes.

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, in order to eradicated
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polluted
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water
, A possible solution to
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tgis
problems would
be applied
new laws
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and and
strict
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rules
for
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installement
of new
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industries
and
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prohabit
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deforeatation
.
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and every individual have
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relised
it, that if the installment of
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industries
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countinous
at
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this
rates they will
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ended
up
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fresh
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water
and deforestation will
further
exacerbate this issue.
For example
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many
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industry
and homes have no proper savage system and the
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polluted
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water
too much, and
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neglacting
purification
as well
as waste product
directly
drained into
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fresh
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water
.
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in order to
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prevent
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become
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polluted
we
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must
include a well purification and
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well developed
savage system.

In conclusion
,
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fresh
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become more and more
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polluted
as a result
of
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industrilization
. This essay
is discussed
how
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water
is
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polluted
by
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induatrilization
and
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deforeatation
. This
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suggust
that every
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measuer
should
be taken
by
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government
and individual that to
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keeps
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fresh
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cleard
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26Mistakes

IELTS essay Fresh water has become a golbal problem for the world. What are the causes of it? what meaaures government and individual should take to resolve to the problem? Give reasons and e. g for your answers v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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