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Freeman Community Minutes of meeting about how to bring development into the environment and make it habitable

Freeman Community Minutes of meeting about how to bring development into the environment and make it habitable n6x6P
Zonal Election: Zonal leaders’ election are to be conducted at all Zones and Sawmill zone presented the list of their Excos while other zones are yet to conduct their elections. Community Day Celebration: The chairman of the committee reported that the day will hold by 2nd week in December, 2019 and our Youths will be involved. On Friday, there will be motivational speakers to talk to our youths. Also, Ankara will be available as our Aso-Ebi. The Chairman encouraged all community members to support in cash and materials. Electricity: • It was reported that some landlords in this community bye-passed their pre-paid meter, but PHC will come to investigate and charge the culprits. • Those that does not have bill should go to PHCN office and collect the form to process their bill. Please note that you need this bill to process your prepaid meter. • Disconnection: i. Security defaulters that are connected to electricity and not paying their due regular, there light will be dropped ii. Electricity payment defaulters’ light also will be dropped. A letter will be written to all the defaulters before the next general meeting. • Chairman sought general house opinion on whether we should continue to allow part payment or full payment before connection. • Mrs Roselyn Nwandu suggested that we should discontinue part payment before connection. • Mr Wasiu and Mr. Olukunle Ige advised that we should continue to allow part payment. And also Mr. Olayemi Michael said that we should allow certain percentage payment and the person default, then we should go in mass and disconnect light. • The general house resolved that part payment should be suspended until we are able to recover 70% of the fund. Rain and Drainage: The Chairman reported that we could not complete the drainage opposite the transformer because the Landlord need to shift his fence back to allow the completion. Mr Wasiu asked if there will be positive effect on the drainage from express at Ananti close. It was reported that EXODUS Company is yet to do what the government instructed them to do and the Chairman responded a reminder will be resent to him. SECURITY: There are lapses in our security, we need to increase the operational base and increase security numbers. Security chairman reported that payment is not coming and we need to increase number of securities. It was resolved that light of security defaulters should be dropped and will generate more fund. Mr. Sunday Ajodo mentioned that uncompleted houses harboured thieves, using it as their hide-out. The landlord of those houses should be contacted. Mr Onafor advised that the community to veto all zones to meet regularly. The Chairman mandated all zones to start holding meeting and all will give their reports to the general house. Any zone that fail to hold meeting will be fined N5, 000 and if the zonal coordinator does not come to 3 consecutive meetings will be fined. AOB: Impact House School made payment for electricity without our consent. • He wrote us a letter for refund. • He has not come to us for connection. • He is no more under Freeman CDA. Alhaji Tadese advised that Mayegun CDA should handle the matter. They should meet him and Mr. Aruwoola on this matter and he should follow the process to connect. It was agreed that a letter should be written to acknowledge receipt of his letter and advise him accordingly. Mr. Adebayo mentioned that that some people have started carrying sacrifice in this community and something must be done to stop this act.
Zonal Election: Zonal leaders’ election are to
be conducted
at all
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Zones
and Sawmill
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zone
presented the list of their
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Excos
while other
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zones
are
yet
to conduct their elections.

Community Day Celebration: The
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chairman
of the committee
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reported
that the day will hold by 2nd week in
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December, 2019
and our Youths will
be involved
. On Friday, there will be motivational speakers to talk to our youths.
Also
, Ankara will be available as our
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Aso-Ebi
.

The
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Chairman
encouraged all
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community
members to support in cash and materials.

Electricity:

• It was
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reported
that
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some
landlords in this
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community
bye-passed their
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pre-paid
meter,
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but
PHC will
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come
to investigate and charge the culprits.

• Those that does not have bill should go to
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PHCN
office and collect the form to process their bill.
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Please
note that you
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need
this bill to process your prepaid meter.

• Disconnection:

i.
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Security
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defaulters
that
are connected
to electricity and not paying their due regular, there light will
be dropped


ii. Electricity
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payment
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defaulters’
light
also
will
be dropped
.

A
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letter
will
be written
to all the
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defaulters
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before
the
next
general meeting.

• Chairman sought general
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house
opinion on whether we should continue to
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allow
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part
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payment
or full
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payment
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before
connection.

• Mrs
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Roselyn
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Nwandu
suggested that we should discontinue
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part
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payment
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before
connection.

• Mr
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Wasiu
and Mr.
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Olukunle
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Ige
advised that we should continue to
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allow
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part
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payment
. And
also
Mr.
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Olayemi
Michael said that we should
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allow
certain percentage
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payment
and the person default, then we should go in mass and disconnect light.

• The general
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house
resolved that
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part
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payment
should
be suspended
until we are able to recover 70% of the fund.

Rain and Drainage: The
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Chairman
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reported
that we could not complete the drainage opposite the transformer
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because
the Landlord
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need
to shift his fence back to
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allow
the completion.

Mr
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Wasiu
asked if there will be
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positive
effect on the drainage from express at
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Ananti
close. It was
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reported
that EXODUS
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Company
is
yet
to do what the
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government
instructed them to do and the
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Chairman
responded a reminder will be resent to him.

SECURITY: There are lapses in our
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security
, we
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need
to increase the operational base and increase
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security
numbers.
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Security
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chairman
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reported
that
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payment
is not
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coming and
we
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need
to increase number of
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securities
. It
was resolved
that light of
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security
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defaulters
should
be dropped
and will generate more fund.

Mr. Sunday
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Ajodo
mentioned that uncompleted
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houses
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harboured
thieves, using it as their
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hide
-out. The landlord of those
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houses
should
be contacted
.

Mr
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Onafor
advised that the
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community
to veto all
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zones
to
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meet
regularly
.

The
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Chairman
mandated all
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zones
to
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start
holding meeting and all will give their reports to the general
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house
. Any
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zone
that fail to hold meeting will
be fined
N5, 000 and if the zonal coordinator does not
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come
to 3 consecutive meetings will
be fined
.

AOB:

Impact
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House
School made
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payment
for electricity without our consent.

• He wrote us a
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letter
for refund.

• He has not
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come
to us for connection.

• He is no more under Freeman CDA.

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Alhaji
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Tadese
advised that
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Mayegun
CDA should handle the matter. They should
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meet
him and Mr.
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Aruwoola
on this
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matter and
he should follow the process to connect.

It was
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agreed
that a
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letter
should
be written
to acknowledge receipt of his
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letter
and advise him
accordingly
.

Mr.
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Adebayo
mentioned
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that that
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some
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people
have
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started
carrying sacrifice in this
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community
and something
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must
be done
to
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stop
this act.
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IELTS essay Freeman Community Minutes of meeting about how to bring development into the environment and make it habitable

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27 paragraphs
586 words
5.5
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