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The passage asserts that a discovered fossil of a type of dinosaur named Sinosauropteryx shows that that animal had not feathers and provided three reasons of support. The lecture, on the contrary, debunks this idea and says that all evidences in the area is strong and the mentioned reasons provided by the passage is not convincing. First, the article states that the found remain is fibers which were decomposed from animal skin is similar to lines of feathers after the animal died. The lecture casts doubt on this point by explaining that there was no solid evidence of other animals in the same region while volcanic ashes preserved feathers in the regions. Since, it shows that those lines are the remain of feather not fibers. Second, it is possible that the remained lines are frills, an ornamental fan-shaped structure, which grows out of Sinosauropteryx's body, according to the reading. The professor disavows this point by saying that frills and feathers have different chemical contents. The feather consists of a type of protein named Betacaraton while frills has no such substances. Third, the author of the passage claims that feathers on the body of Sinosauropteryx were not functional since they were used to regulate animal's temperature. The professor repudiates this passage' claim reasoning that other animals used those feather as a tool to attract mate. She also states that further analysis reveals that Sinosauropteryx had colorful feather utilizing for display. so this shows that those lines are a great support for Sinosauropteryx's feathers.
The passage asserts that a discovered fossil of a type of dinosaur named
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Sinosauropteryx
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shows
that that
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animal
had not
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feathers
and provided three reasons of support. The lecture,
on the contrary
, debunks this
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idea
and says that all evidences in the area is strong and the mentioned reasons provided by the passage is not convincing.

First
, the article states that the found remain is fibers which
were decomposed
from
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animal
skin is similar to
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lines
of
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feathers
after the
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animal
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died
. The lecture casts doubt on this point by explaining that there was no solid evidence of other
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animals
in the same region while volcanic ashes preserved
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feathers
in the regions.
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Since
, it
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shows
that those
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lines
are
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the remain
of
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feather
not fibers.

Second, it is possible that the remained
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lines
are frills, an ornamental fan-shaped structure, which grows out of
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Sinosauropteryx
's body, according to the reading. The professor disavows this point by saying that frills and
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feathers
have
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different
chemical contents. The
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feather
consists of a type of protein named
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Betacaraton
while frills has no such substances.

Third, the author of the passage claims that
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feathers
on the body of
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Sinosauropteryx
were not functional since they were
In the grammatical structure 'pronoun + be/get + used + to + verb', the verb 'used' is used with the gerund: "used to regulating".
used to regulate
animal's temperature. The professor repudiates this passage' claim reasoning that other
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animals
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used
those
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feather
as a tool to attract mate. She
also
states that
further
analysis reveals that
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Sinosauropteryx
had colorful
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feather
utilizing for display.
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so
this
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shows
that those
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lines
are a great support for
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Sinosauropteryx
's
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.

IELTS essay fossil of dinosaur

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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