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Based on reading franchise is a new license issued that people take for debuting a new business by using of a well-know company's brand: the reading explains that its advantages. The lecture, however, introduces some evidences that undermine such claim. First, reading points out that any person should pay a huge money for buying raw materials, equipments, etc for starting independent business, while franchise owener support he or she, and person can save a lot of money by elaminating this cost. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that individuals must buy specific service from franchise owner: it is costly for them, whereas they can debut new business by the help of cheaper plans. Second, people can save money by using of franchise method for starting a new business since franchise owner spend money for advertising: therefore people can save money, as author claims, is repudiated by the lecture. She mentions that franchise owner gets 6% from totall selling for advertising, while they spend half of this cost in independent business. Also, franchise company advertists its products and brand. Third, the passage claims that franchise method is so reliable since it reduces risk of failure owing to the presence of rough competition in the world. In contrast, the speaking says that although franchise business is lee risky, there are limited options for people for developing their business reasoning that they failure rating in franchise company is twice of the independent business.

Based on reading franchise is a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 license issued that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 take for debuting a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 by using of a well-know This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's brand: the reading This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 that its advantages. The lecture, however
, introduces This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 evidences that undermine such claim.

First
, reading points out that any person should pay a huge You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 for buying raw materials, equipments, etc for starting independent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
, while franchise Possible spelling mistake found.owneropener
owener
 support he or she, and person can save This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 by Possible spelling mistake found.eliminatinglaminatinge laminating
elaminating
 this cost. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that individuals This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 specific service from franchise owner: it is costly for them, whereas they can debut You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of cheaper plans.

Second, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can save You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 by using of franchise method for starting a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 since franchise owner spend You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 for advertising: therefore
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can save You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
, as author claims, is repudiated
 by the lecture. She mentions that franchise owner This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 6% from Possible spelling mistake found.totaltotallytotalsto talltot alltotal l
totall
 selling for advertising, while they spend half of this cost in independent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
. Also
, franchise This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
Possible spelling mistake found.advertisesAdventists
advertists
 its products and brand.

Third, the passage claims that franchise method is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 reliable since it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviates
reduces
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 of failure owing to the presence of rough competition in the world. In contrast
, the speaking says that although franchise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 is lee risky, there are limited
 options for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 for developing their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 reasoning that Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'they'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
they failure
 rating in franchise This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is twice of the independent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
. 