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The passage asserts that Tyrannosaurus rex' s bones have tissues of blood vessels, red blood cells, and collagen matrix and provides three resons of support. The lecturer, on the contrary, repudiates this point ans says that these reasons are skeptical and rebuts all mentioned reasons by the passage. First, the article claims that Tyrannosaurus rex has some channels inside led bone. The professsor debunks this idea by explaining that channels are not neccessarily remains of tissue. They are remains of colonized bacteria which have left, since they have left organic minerals. Second, there aresome spheres in the bone which reveals that they are remains of blood cells, since those spheres have color and size of blood cells, according to the reading. The professor disavows this point by saying that these relics are identical properties of other animals in the same area which shows they are not red blood. He also states that these red spheres are remains of redish organic minerals. Third, the author of the passage imparts that leg bone of Tyrannosaurus rex has collagen which is kind of material included in bone tissue. The lecturer casts doubt on this passae' claim by disapproving that collagen is not belong to Tyrannosaurus rex reasonin gthat they were from an earlier time. He avers that those collagen may have recent source like remins of human' skin whic is from researchers handled Tyrannosaurus rex's bones.
The passage asserts that Tyrannosaurus
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rex
' s
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bones
have tissues of
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blood
vessels, red
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blood
cells, and collagen matrix and provides three
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resons
of support. The lecturer,
on the contrary
, repudiates this point ans says that these reasons are skeptical and rebuts all mentioned reasons by the passage.

First
, the article claims that Tyrannosaurus
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rex
has
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some
channels inside led
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bone
. The
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professsor
debunks this
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idea
by explaining that channels are not
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neccessarily
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remains
of tissue. They are
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remains
of colonized bacteria which have
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left
, since they have
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left
organic minerals.

Second, there
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aresome
spheres in the
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bone
which reveals that they are
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remains
of
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blood
cells, since those spheres have color and size of
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blood
cells, according to the reading. The professor disavows this point by saying that these relics are identical properties of other animals in the same area which
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shows
they are not red
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blood
. He
also
states that these red spheres are
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remains
of
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redish
organic minerals.

Third, the author of the passage imparts that leg
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bone
of Tyrannosaurus
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rex
has collagen which is kind of material included in
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bone
tissue. The lecturer casts doubt on this
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passae
' claim by disapproving that collagen is not
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belong
to Tyrannosaurus
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rex
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reasonin gthat
they were from an earlier time. He avers that
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those collagen
may have recent source like
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remins
of human' skin
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whic
is from researchers handled Tyrannosaurus
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rex
's
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IELTS essay dinosaur's bones

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
233 words
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