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vessel as a battery

vessel as a battery WyDOD

The passage asserts that an ancient vessel contained a copper cylinder discovered in Iraq, was used as battery and provided three reasons of support. The professor rebuts each reason mentioned by the passage and says that all of them are unconvincing. First, the article claims that no wire has attached to the discovered vessel. The lecturer casts doubt on this point by saying that the vessel was discovered by local people who were untrained in this field. They were not like professional archaeologists, and they no longer recongined the wires and conductors. Second, the cylinder found in the vessel has never a role in the producing electricity, since it was employed for holding scrolls, according to the article. The professor disapproves this point by explaining that it is possible that ancient people used this cylinder to produce electricity, since they knew iron rod with liquid will produce electricity. She also states that it may was produced for one purpose, but it be used for another goal. Third, the reading imparts that vessel hah no application in the ancient time. The professor, on the contrary, disavows this idea and says that this vessel produced a mild shok to be interpeted as an invisible power. She also indicates that like modern doctors, ancient people used the electricity to heal the pain by electrical currents.

The passage asserts that an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withantiqueage-oldvenerablehoaryold-fashionedtimeworn
ancient
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withocean linercraftbargeboatlinertanker
vessel
 contained a copper cylinder discovered in Iraq, was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as battery and provided three reasons of support. The professor rebuts each reason mentioned by the passage and says that all of them are unconvincing.

First
, the article claims that no wire has attached to the discovered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withocean linercraftbargeboatlinertanker
vessel
. The lecturer casts doubt on this point by saying that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withocean linercraftbargeboatlinertanker
vessel
was discovered
 by local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who were untrained
 in this field. They were not like professional archaeologists, and they no longer Possible spelling mistake found.recognizedreconciledreconvenedrecombinedreconsignedrecoined
recongined
 the wires and conductors.

Second, the cylinder found in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withocean linercraftbargeboatlinertanker
vessel
 has never a role in the producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
electricity
, since it was employed
 for holding scrolls, according to the article. The professor disapproves this point by explaining that it is possible that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withantiqueage-oldvenerablehoaryold-fashionedtimeworn
ancient
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 this cylinder to produce You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
electricity
, since they knew iron rod with liquid will produce You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
electricity
. She also
 states that it may This form is ambiguous and can be used as past tense. Confirm that you are using the intended base form of the main verb after 'to do' as an auxiliary verb..
was
 produced for one purpose, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it Did you mean "is"?is
be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for another goal.

Third, the reading imparts that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withocean linercraftbargeboatlinertanker
vessel
 hah no application in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withantiqueage-oldvenerablehoaryold-fashionedtimeworn
ancient
 time. The professor, on the contrary
, disavows this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 and says that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withocean linercraftbargeboatlinertanker
vessel
 produced a mild Possible spelling mistake found.showshotshopshockshoeshook
shok
 to be Possible spelling mistake found.interpreted
interpeted
 as an invisible power. She also
 indicates that like modern doctors, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withantiqueage-oldvenerablehoaryold-fashionedtimeworn
ancient
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
electricity
 to heal the pain by electrical currents. 