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Fossil fuels have been the main driver of economic growth for the last 100 hundred years. Explain how fossil fuels have achieved this, outline the main problems their use causes, and suggest alternative solutions.

Fossil fuels have been the main driver of economic growth for the last 100 hundred years. Explain how fossil fuels have achieved this, outline the main problems their use causes, and suggest alternative solutions. 5k9KD
These days, large numbers of people have been increasingly concerned about the use of fossil fuels. This essay will explain why we use them, the problems they are leading to, and some possible solutions. To start with there are several reasons why fossil fuels have become so important. In fact, in the form of oil, coal, and natural gas fossil fuels power everything from factories and power plants to transportation. They are even used to make many household products like plastic. But the most dramatic has been petroleum. Without this, the modern car-based society would not exist. However, there constant use has caused a number of problems. The most obvious one is pollution. Air quality in most large cities is terrible, and causing lots of health problems, especially among children. It is so bad people that in Beijing people can actually buy bottled fresh air imported from Canada. A related problem are the plastics and other products made from fossil fuels. Since they do not biodegrade, plastic has contaminated the environment now threatens sea life all around the world. Finally, burning fossil fuels releases carbon dioxide, which is a key cause of climate change. So what can we do to stop using fossil fuels since they’re such an important part of our life? The main solution is alternative energy. Producing electricity from solar and wind power will dramatically reduce the need for fossil fuels. However, it is insufficient. The second solution is replacing cars and trucks that are dependent on fuel with electric ones. Similarly, there are also greener alternatives to plastics. For example, The Lego company recently started a new research facility to develop a better greener alternative for their lego bricks. In conclusion, although fossil fuels have been vital to our societies, their use is starting to decline. I believe that in the future, we will continue to shift to alternative forms of energy production and fuel use.
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possible solutions.

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with there are several reasons why
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fossil
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fuels
have become
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so
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important
. In fact, in the

form of oil, coal, and natural gas
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fossil
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fuels
power everything from factories and power plants to

transportation. They are even
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used
to
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make
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many
household products like
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plastic
.
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But
the most

dramatic has been petroleum. Without this, the modern car-based society would not exist.

However
, there constant
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use
has caused a number of
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problems
. The most obvious one is

pollution. Air quality in most large cities is terrible, and causing lots of health
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problems
,
especially


among children. It is
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so
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bad
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that in Beijing
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bottled fresh air

imported from Canada. A related
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problem
are the
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plastics
and other products made from fossil

fuels. Since they do not biodegrade,
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plastic
has contaminated the environment
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now
threatens

sea life all around the world.
Finally
, burning
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fossil
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fuels
releases carbon dioxide, which is a key

cause of climate
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what can we do to
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using
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fossil
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fuels
since they’re such an
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important
part of our life? The

main solution is
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alternative
energy. Producing electricity from solar and wind power will

dramatically
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reduce
the need for
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fossil
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fuels
.
However
, it is insufficient. The second solution is

replacing cars and trucks that are dependent on
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fuel
with electric ones.
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, there are
also


greener
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alternatives
to
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plastics
.
For example
, The Lego
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company
recently
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started
a new research

facility to develop a better greener
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alternative
for their
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lego
bricks.

In conclusion
, although
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fossil
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fuels
have been vital to our societies, their
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use
is starting to decline.

I believe that in the future, we will continue to shift to
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alternative
forms of energy production and
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fuel
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use
.
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IELTS essay Fossil fuels have been the main driver of economic growth for the last 100 hundred years. Explain how fossil fuels have achieved this, outline the main problems their use causes, and suggest alternative solutions.

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320 words
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