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about a house/ flat you would like to live in.

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The house I want to live in is a large, modern villa located near the sea. The house is surrounded by sand and the sea and is painted with the main colors of yellow and green. The house is operated by an AI. It will consist of 10 bedrooms, 3 dining rooms, 2 living rooms where there will be a large TV for the whole family to watch, and an outdoor swimming pool. In addition, the villa will also include a cinema room, a garage for cars and a large yard for my family to play football or invite friends and relatives to play. Especially the bedroom, where there is a view overlooking the sea so that you can relax after studying. Hopefully, the day I can stay in my dream home is not far away.
The
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I want to
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live
in is a large, modern villa located near the sea. The
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house
is surrounded
by sand and the sea and
is painted
with the main colors of yellow and green.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
is operated
by an AI. It will consist of 10 bedrooms, 3 dining rooms, 2 living rooms where there will be a large TV for the whole family to
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watch
, and an outdoor swimming pool.
In addition
, the villa will
also
include a cinema room, a garage for cars and a large yard for my family to play football or invite friends and relatives to play.
Especially
the bedroom, where there is a view overlooking the sea
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that you can relax after studying.
Hopefully
, the day I can stay in my dream home is not far away.

IELTS essay about a house/ flat you would like to live in.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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