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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.1

Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. with this statement? v. 1
Education is the rudimentary rights of students. In the past, formal examinations are the only way that shows the position of students in their education. Over recent years, there has been a tremendous change in the syllabus to analyse students educational scenario. Some people are not agree with these kind change like coursework and Project. They think that it is not a satisfactory way to analyse education. I am disagree with the Statement. This essay will discuss both views in a Positive way. Formal examinations are conducted in school to assess student's performance. Through this exams, we can calculate a student's knowledge through a wiritten test. In the past, these form of exams are the only way to assess a student's knowledge in a subject. Formal examinations are the effective way to find how alert a student in class or a student's interest in various subjects. For example, a student who is an expert in Mathematics and interested in numbers get high martes in their exam. On the other hand, the same student got a low marks in his Science exams because not only he is not interested in that subiect but also he got a favourable mark according to his hard work. In this way, we can find out a student interest and that may increases competition to get high marks in all subjects. Similarly continual assessment such as coursework and Project improves a student’s educational quality. Nowadays education department implemented new syllabus that improve a student’s knowledge as well as practical capabilities too. Most of them Consider this is a positive assessment and in this way students can develop their cognitive skills. A case in point is that, Continual assessment includes, Project assignments, seminars, workshops, and also debates. In order to get high grade, students needed to collect more informations which improve their knowledge. while the students deals with these kinds of activities that helps to improve communication Skills, language quality, Pradical experience. To sum up, both assessments are useful for a student's career and these assessments improve their grasping capacity. The fact is that, not only continual assessment but also with Formal examination will helps to create a good future in the life of a student. So many of the countries, these methods of evaluations are adapted.
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Education
is the rudimentary rights of
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students
. In the past, formal
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examinations
are the
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only
way that
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shows
the position of
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students
in their
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education
. Over recent years, there has been a tremendous
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change
in the syllabus to
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analyse
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students
educational scenario.
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Some
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people
are not
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agree
with these kind
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change
like coursework and Project. They
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think
that it is not a satisfactory way to
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analyse
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education
. I am disagree with the Statement. This essay will discuss both views in a
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Positive
way.

Formal
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examinations
are conducted
in school to assess
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student's
performance. Through
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this
exams, we can calculate a
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student's
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knowledge
through a
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wiritten
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test
. In the past, these form of exams are the
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only
way to assess a
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student's
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knowledge
in a subject. Formal
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examinations
are the effective way to find how alert a
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student
in
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class
or a
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student's
interest in various subjects.
For example
, a
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student
who is an expert in Mathematics and interested in numbers
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get
high
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martes
in their exam.
On the other hand
, the same
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student
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got
a low marks in his Science exams
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because
not
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only
he is not interested in that
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subiect
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but
also
he
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got
a
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favourable
mark according to his
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hard
work. In this way, we can find out a
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student
interest and that may increases competition to
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get
high marks in all subjects.

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continual
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assessment
such as coursework and Project
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improves
a
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student’s
educational quality. Nowadays
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education
department implemented new syllabus that
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improve
a
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student’s
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knowledge
as well
as practical capabilities too. Most of them Consider this is a
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positive
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assessment
and in this way
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students
can develop their cognitive
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skills
. A case in point is that, Continual
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assessment
includes, Project assignments, seminars, workshops, and
also
debates. In order to
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get
high grade,
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students
needed to collect more
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informations
which
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improve
their
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knowledge
.
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while
the
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students
deals with these kinds of activities that
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helps
to
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improve
communication
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Skills
, language quality,
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Pradical
experience.

To sum up, both
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assessments
are useful for a
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student's
career and these
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assessments
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improve
their grasping capacity. The fact is that, not
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only
continual
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assessment
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but
also
with Formal
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examination
will
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helps
to create a
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good
future in the life of a
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student
.
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So
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many
of the countries, these methods of evaluations
are adapted
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS essay Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
380 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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