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For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However common nowadays people's values has changed, and we tend to consider signs for my technology and business more important than arts what do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However common nowadays people's values has changed, and we tend to consider signs for my technology and business more important than arts what do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art? MXB9

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