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The college years are the best time in a person's life. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Give specific reasons to support your position.

The college years are the best time in a person's life. Give specific reasons to support your position. LA9r
Collage life is experiencing new things. It is the place where we can bloom like a flower. So, yes I agree with the given statement. As far as I am concerned, the college years are one of the unforgettable time of life on account of many reasons, two of which are as follows: Firstly, most of the friends get more connected and continued to be the best buddies for the life. As, they have less jealousy, hatred and competition. Secondly, this is the initial phase of our journey to design our goals and path. May it be related to career or future. Our area of interests can also be explored to groom our future. To sum up all, I personally feel that everyone learning period is best days of life which decides future and achieve better opportunities. Secondly, this is the initial phase of our journey to design our goals and path. May i be related to career or future goals. Our area of interests cam also be explored to groom our future. To sum up all, I personally feel that everyone learning period is best days of life which decides future and achieve better opportunities.
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, the college years are one of the unforgettable time of
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life
on account of
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many
reasons, two of which are as follows:

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, most of the friends
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get
more connected and continued to be the best buddies for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. As, they have less jealousy, hatred and competition.
Secondly
, this is the initial phase of our journey to design our goals and path. May it
be related
to career or
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future
. Our area of interests can
also
be explored
to groom our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
. To sum up all, I
personally
feel that everyone learning period
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is best
days of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
which decides
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
and achieve better opportunities.

Secondly
, this is the initial phase of our journey to design our goals and path. May
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i
be related
to career or
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future
goals. Our area of interests cam
also
be explored
to groom our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
. To sum up all, I
personally
feel that everyone learning period
A determiner is probably missing here: "is the best".
is best
days of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
which decides
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
and achieve better opportunities.
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IELTS essay The college years are the best time in a person's life. Give specific reasons to support your position.

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3 paragraphs
196 words
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