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Food is essential for life

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food is inevitable for human survival; many people believe that regional food is much better than exported food others however do not agree with this notion. This essay will discuss will that merits of having local will overweigh demerits. There are several advantages that one should take it into consideration. Firstly, locally originated food that means being aware of food that we eat, which means guaranteed better health. To be more precise, an individual can live a healthy life with minimal cost. Secondly, giving more preference will create more demand for local food, which will end up in more employment and assist local people to earn their livelihood. Thirdly, society will be happier by supporting local food as it leads to other benefits as well as this sort of tendency will generate a strong bonding between each other in society. Lastly, by environmental perspective there would not need of shipped food therefore, it will save transportation cost and will help environment by reducing air pollution. On the other side, outside food gives us opportunity to try different varieties of food that would be available in market and it will give sense of satisfaction too. Besides, in this fast pace of life people are busy in day-to-day life where they are less likely to think about their price so that they could prefer convenience over their expenses. To sum up, as per above demonstration it can be noticeable seen that advantages of having local food surpasses the disadvantages of it. Similarly, I tend to believe that it could be much better to eat local food compare to shipped food.
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believe that regional
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is much better than exported
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others
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do not
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agree
with this notion. This essay will discuss will that merits of having
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overweigh
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There are several advantages that one should take it into consideration.
Firstly
,
locally
originated
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food
that means being aware of
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food
that we eat, which means guaranteed better health. To be more precise, an individual can
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live
a healthy life with minimal cost.
Secondly
, giving more preference will create more demand for
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local
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food
, which will
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end
up in more employment and assist
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local
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people
to earn their livelihood.
Thirdly
, society will be happier by supporting
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local
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food
as it leads to
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other
benefits
as well
as this sort of tendency will generate a strong bonding between each
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in society.
Lastly
, by environmental perspective there would not need of shipped
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food
therefore
, it will save transportation cost and will
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help
environment by reducing air pollution.

On the
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side, outside
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gives us opportunity to try
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different
varieties of
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that would be available in market and it will give sense of satisfaction too.
Besides
, in this
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fast
pace of life
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people
are busy in day-to-day life where they are less likely to
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think
about their price
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so
that they could prefer convenience over their expenses.

To sum up, as per above demonstration it can be noticeable
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seen
that advantages of having
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local
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surpasses the disadvantages of it.
Similarly
, I tend to believe that it could be much better to eat
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local
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compare to shipped
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.
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IELTS essay Food is essential for life

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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