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Following the rapid development of economy, people's life is getting much better nowadays.

Following the rapid development of economy, people's life is getting much better nowadays. However, more and more waste is produced caused by packages, plastic bags, and abandoned materials etc. How to deal with the huge amount of waste has been a very difficult problem for the governments. In some countries, the governments have asked citizens to classify the waste to recycle it as much as possible. But the effect is not so good since picking out the recycling resource from waste is not mandatory. As a result, some people deem that the government should make a low to enforce the behavior of collect out recyclable wastes, which is strongly supported by me. Firstly, people are now living in a rapid society and most of them are not willing to spend extra time on classify wastes which is a dirty job and also cost a lot of time. If nothing will happen to you no matter you do the waste classification or not, will you do the thing actively? Absolutely not. Secondly, most people have no knowledge on which waste is recyclable. Without pressure from a low, I don't believe that many people will read the recycling instructions. If a person will be punished with a bill for doing a mistake waste classification, I am sure he will learn the waste recycling knowledge immediately. At last, to build a waste-recycling custom is not easy without any pressure. Making it as a mandatory behavior by a low will help people to get used to it in a short time. In conclusion, people won't make any changes without enforcement. To recycle more of the waste, the governments should make the cycling waste as a mandatory behavior by a law as soon as possible to solve the increasing waste amount and difficulty of processing it.
Following the rapid development of economy,
people
's life is getting much better nowadays.
However
, more and more
waste
is produced
caused by packages, plastic bags, and abandoned materials etc. How to deal with the huge amount of
waste
has been a
very
difficult problem for the
governments
. In
some
countries, the
governments
have asked citizens to classify the
waste
to recycle it as much as possible.
But
the effect is not
so
good
since picking out the recycling resource from
waste
is not mandatory.
As a result
,
some
people
deem that the
government
should
make
a low to enforce the behavior of collect out recyclable
wastes
, which is
strongly
supported by me.

Firstly
,
people
are
now
living in a rapid society and most of them are not willing to spend extra time on classify
wastes
which is a dirty job and
also
cost
a lot of
time. If nothing
will happen
to you no matter you do the
waste
classification or not, will you do the thing
actively
?
Absolutely
not.

Secondly
, most
people
have no knowledge on which
waste
is recyclable. Without pressure from a low, I don't believe that
many
people
will read the recycling instructions. If a person will
be punished
with a bill for doing a mistake
waste
classification, I am sure he will learn the
waste
recycling knowledge immediately.

At last, to build a waste-recycling custom is not easy without any pressure. Making it as a mandatory behavior by a low will
help
people
to
get
used
to it in a short time.

In conclusion
,
people
won't
make
any
changes
without enforcement. To recycle more of the
waste
, the
governments
should
make
the cycling
waste
as a mandatory behavior by a law as
soon
as possible to solve the increasing
waste
amount and difficulty of processing it.
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IELTS essay Following the rapid development of economy, people's life is getting much better nowadays.

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301 words
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