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first day at school new school

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How was your first day at your new school? How did you feel? I think there're probably a lof of people who don't have friends at their first day of a new school like me but first let me tell you about my experience! At my new school, I don't even know anyone because I moued from another prouince that is Chumphon where the school is in Pathum Thani and most of my friends continue study at chumphon. No one look the exam at the same school asme. but On the first day of school I'm very excited also stressed because I'm afraid that I won't have friends. Most of them are already know each Double. other. But the first day was very good, most of friends are friendly, Even though studied online on the first day at a new school is boring but I learned that it wasn't that hard to have new friends. Thank you for listening!
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, I don't even know anyone

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and most of my
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for listening!
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IELTS essay first day at school new school

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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