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films play a vital role in human life .

films play a vital role in human life. KyL1M
I am completely satisfied that film can not washout and spoil mind of people some movie are base on education and teach a good lesson to our society. Nowadays movie is a source of entertainment as well as also part of education. several times whatever we want to tech our children we realized that we are not successful but movie is proof immune treasure of knowledge. nowadays film industries additionally prim focus on education, social evils, childhood marriage and awareness of women rights. entertainment industries moreover focus on dailysoap serials, and webseries furthermore helpful for step down evils of our neighborhood. family give attention enforced their child because every child has different quality and skills. they have full rights whatever they want to do in their life. conclusion - At the end of this essay film paly vital role in this environment to improve the person basically who believes books knowledge is sufficient for our youths Ramayana and mahabharat serials is a good example to show film can be good impacts on youth.
I am completely satisfied that film can not washout and spoil mind of
people
some
movie
are base on education and teach a
good
lesson to our society. Nowadays movie is a source of entertainment
as well
as
also
part of education.
several
times whatever we want to tech our children we realized that we are not successful
but
movie is proof immune treasure of knowledge.
nowadays
film industries
additionally
prim focus on education, social evils, childhood marriage and awareness of women rights.
entertainment
industries
moreover
focus on
dailysoap
serials, and
webseries
furthermore
helpful for step down evils of our neighborhood.
family
give
attention


enforced
their child
because
every child has
different
quality and
skills
.
they
have full rights whatever they want to do in their life.

conclusion
-
At the
end
of this essay film
paly
vital role in this environment to
improve
the person
basically
who believes books knowledge is sufficient for our youths Ramayana and
mahabharat
serials is a
good
example to
show
film can be
good
impacts on youth.
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IELTS essay films play a vital role in human life.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
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