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I watched a movie last night was the Home last night. It was a South Indian film in the Malayalam language. I watched that film in my home theater in the evening. The movie is a fable of a middle-class family. In this film a golden aged man whose name was George. He has father, wife, and two sons. His father's name was Mathew and he was a dementia patient. His wife's was Elsa, and she was a retired nurse and the whole house was run by her pension. His younger boy was Joe and he was a student. George's elder boy who was Dan. Dan was an architect, and he left his job for cinema direction. His first cinema became a mega-hit and he couldn't do any more film after his first cinema. Dan was frustrated due to the non-growth of his film carrier, and he always makes fighting with his fiancée Emma. George reveals his younger age adventures to motivate his moody elder son but he didn't believe it. But he impressed only his girlfriend's dad's books and talks. The girlfriend's grandma tells the fable of the unknown boy helping her poisoned son to take hospital from a remote area. After hearing the story from grandma, the elder son impressed his dad. He tells his Girlfriend's clan about the real hero in the birthday party's story. Girlfriends' entire house came to George's house and praised his work at a younger age. I saw this film due to the fact thatthe film viewers' review was 10 out of 10. I watched that film with my house members.
I
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watched
a movie last night was the Home last night. It was a South Indian film in the Malayalam language. I
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watched
that film in my home theater in the evening.

The movie is a fable of a middle-
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class
family. In this film a golden aged
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man
whose name was George. He has
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father
, wife, and two
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sons
. His father's name was
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Mathew and
he was a dementia patient. His
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wife's
was Elsa, and she was a retired nurse and the whole
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house
was run
by her pension.
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His
younger boy was Joe and he was a student. George's elder boy who was Dan. Dan was an architect, and he
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left
his job for cinema direction. His
first
cinema became a
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mega-hit and
he couldn't do any more film after his
first
cinema. Dan
was frustrated
due to the non-growth of his film carrier, and he always
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makes
fighting with his fiancée Emma. George reveals his younger age adventures to motivate his moody elder
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son
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but
he didn't believe it.
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But
he impressed
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only
his girlfriend's dad's books and talks. The girlfriend's grandma
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tells
the fable of the unknown boy helping her poisoned
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son
to take hospital from a remote area. After hearing the story from grandma, the elder
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son
impressed his dad. He
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tells
his Girlfriend's clan about the real hero in the birthday party's story. Girlfriends' entire
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house
came to George's
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house
and praised his work at a younger age.

I
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saw
this film due to the fact
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thatthe
film viewers' review was 10 out of 10. I
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watched
that film with my
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house
members.
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IELTS essay film i watched last night

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  American English
3 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
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