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Few people think that television programs are of no better for children .what extent you agree or disagree .

Few people think that television programs are of no better for children. what extent you agree or disagree. KYWjR
It is argued that by fewer individual, television programmes are of no beneficial for juveniles. i disagree with given statement, owing to source of knowledge and daily updates of news are big role play in childrens life. Primarly, tv is better way for boost knowledge. The reason behind this majority of youngsters who spend a lot of time on tv as well as gained their mind power with help of tech channel. Despite this not only children can improve their communication skills, but also can improve own listening skills. A survey conducted by NIOS in 2019, revealed that 70 percent children give prefearance to tv for improve their basic skills. Hence, children could learn easily with tv programs. Moving further, tv connected to children with whole country by news and programs. Because many channels which publishes daily news updates through tv channels. Although some channel are not good for children, yet tv big role play in themself life. such as Bbc, cnn, Time-now ecetra. Thus, these programs gained general knowledge of childrens. To conclude -due to daily updates and better way of get knowledge is beneficial for juveniles in their daily life. In my perspective it is positive development.
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way for boost
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knowledge
. The reason behind this majority of youngsters who spend
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time on
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tv
as well
as gained their mind power with
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help
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channel
. Despite this not
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children
can
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improve
their communication
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skills
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listening
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skills
. A survey conducted by
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NIOS
in 2019, revealed that 70 percent
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children
give
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prefearance
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tv
for
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their basic
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skills
.
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children
could learn
easily
with
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tv
programs.

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further
,
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tv
connected to
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children
with whole country by news and programs.
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channels
which publishes
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news updates through
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tv
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channels
. Although
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,
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tv
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big
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, Time-
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now
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ecetra
.
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, these programs gained general
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knowledge
of
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childrens
.

To conclude
-due to
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daily
updates and better way of
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get
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knowledge
is beneficial for juveniles in their
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daily
life. In my perspective it is
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positive
development.
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IELTS essay Few people think that television programs are of no better for children. what extent you agree or disagree.

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