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Favorite sport you chose

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My favourite sport is volleyball. By playing this sports game a group from 8 to 16 people is divided into 2 groups, which are moved in both sides behind the net that is located in the centre of the playground. A player throws ball to the part of the playground, where other team is located. If none of them beats the ball back, the team, which threw ball to the gets a point. The amount of points that are required to end the game are may be selected at player’s own. This game does not require much equipment. A player only needs a pair of trainers, T-shirt, shorts or a tracksuit. The most important thing in equipment for volleyball Playing volleyball is to be light and able to easily move in. Volleyball requires being active and attentive during playing because of the temp of the game, because a player always needs to look where the ball is, if anybody is ready to beat it back.

My Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
 sport is volleyball. By playing this sports game a group from 8 to 16 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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is
 divided into 2 groups, which are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 in both sides behind the net that is located
 in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the playground. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 throws ball to the part of the playground, where other team is located
. If none of them beats the ball back, the team, which threw ball to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 a point. The amount of points that are required
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 the game are may be selected
 at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player’s
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
.

This game does not require much equipment. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 needs a pair of trainers, T-shirt, shorts or a tracksuit. The most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing in equipment for volleyball Playing volleyball is to be light and able to easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 in.

Volleyball requires being active and attentive during playing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the temp of the game, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 always needs to look where the ball is, if anybody is ready to beat it back. 