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Fast food become important part of everywhere ,it has negative effects on lifestyle or dier do u agre e or not

Fast food become important part of everywhere, it has negative effects on lifestyle or dier do u agre e or not 3WARJ
In this contemporary era, it is undoubtedly true that majority of individuals love to eat junk food such as a pizza, burger and many more on regular basis or intervals. However, a some are of beleive that it will exert adverse influence on falks livelihood and nutrients. i firmly agree with this statement. My preference is explained further in ensuing paragraphs. Discussing the reasons, the foremost one is that hectic lifestyle. To illustrates this, nowadays people have not abundance time for making cuisines for themselves. As they ought to meet their deadlines, in order to achieve success in thier life. citizens can easily obtain these types of foods. In this way, they would able to do more focus on thier work becouse they can prevent thier precious time.
In this contemporary era, it is
undoubtedly
true that majority of individuals
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to eat junk food such as a pizza, burger and
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many
more on regular basis or intervals.
However
, a
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some
are of
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beleive
that it will exert adverse influence on
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falks
livelihood and nutrients.
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i
firmly
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agree
with this statement. My preference is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
further
in ensuing paragraphs. Discussing the reasons, the foremost one is that hectic lifestyle. To illustrates this, nowadays
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have not abundance time for making cuisines for themselves. As they ought to
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meet
their deadlines, in order to achieve success in
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thier
life.
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citizens
can
easily
obtain these types of foods. In this way, they
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would able
to do more focus on
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thier
work
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becouse
they can
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prevent
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thier
precious time.
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IELTS essay Fast food become important part of everywhere, it has negative effects on lifestyle or dier do u agre e or not

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