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Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession. Why is this the case and what can be done to avoid it?

Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession. Why is this the case and what can be done to avoid it? ADwn
Admittedly, agriculture has been the primary source of every nations to develop themselves. however, many youngsters are not choose farming as there career. the reasons behind the occurrence can be attributed in to lack of income generation along with need more phisical attention. The ensuing paragraphs reveal the reasons in deataild way to provide solutionsFirstly, getting lack of incomes are the main reason, why people do not choose the profession as a farmer. the line of reasoning is very clear that, as the threatening of insects as well as nature disasters, which distroy farmers plants horribly. To illustrate it, although thease disasters are not man maid process, people invest there fortune for agriculture land
Admittedly
, agriculture has been the primary source of every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "nation"?
nations
to develop themselves.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
however
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
youngsters are not
Consider using a past participle here: "chosen".
choose
farming as there career.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
reasons behind the occurrence can
be attributed
in to lack of income generation along with need more
Possible spelling mistake found.
phisical
attention. The ensuing paragraphs reveal the reasons in
Possible spelling mistake found.
deataild
way to provide
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solutionsFirstly
, getting lack of incomes are the main reason, why
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
do not choose the profession as a farmer.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
line of reasoning is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that, as the threatening of insects
as well
as nature disasters, which
Possible spelling mistake found.
distroy
farmers plants
horribly
. To illustrate it, although
Possible spelling mistake found.
thease
disasters are not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
maid process,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
invest there fortune for agriculture
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
land
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IELTS essay Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession. Why is this the case and what can be done to avoid it?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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