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Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this?

Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. DlN9p
This essay will highlight that this certainly is a rational approach that needs to implement wherever possible, but it should be ensured that tariffs should be reduced sometimes for small scale traders. Imposing tariffs on imported food will ultimately boost the people to go for local food providers which will ultimately boost the local economy. However, tariffs should be waived off in case of national emergency. Since conditions such as natural calamities like drought or floods which destroys the crops occurs in an unpredictable manner, government should waive the tariffs in order to meet the need. It is said - "Scarcity is the mother of invention". One country facing scarcity of some food material will automatically increase import of such food from other country. Here, special tariffs will benefit the country providing food as the import trades will subsequently increase due to scarcity. On the other hand, I would argue that increased tax on imported food will not benefit the importing country sometimes. Government impose high tariffs which ultimately leads to inflation. In one country rice may sold at 40 rupees per kilogram, but if the same country imports it to another country, the price of rice may get increased due to tariffs on imported food product. Ultimately, the retail individual has to buy it at higher price. It is clearly understandable that importing tariffs will not only protect the farmers within the country but also tax collected as special tariffs will benefit the country. On the contrary, it will affect the retail individual as they might have to buy imported food at higher price.
This essay will highlight that this
certainly
is a rational approach that needs to implement wherever possible,
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but
it should
be ensured
that
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tariffs
should be
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reduced
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sometimes
for
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small
scale traders. Imposing
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tariffs
on
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imported
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food
will
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ultimately
boost the
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people
to go for local
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food
providers which will
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ultimately
boost the local economy.

However
,
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tariffs
should be
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waived off
in case of national emergency. Since conditions such as natural calamities like drought or floods which
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destroys
the crops occurs
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in an unpredictable manner
,
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government
should waive the
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tariffs
in order to
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meet
the need.

It
is said
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-
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"
Scarcity is the mother of invention
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"
. One
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country
facing scarcity of
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some
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food
material will
automatically
increase import of such
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food
from other
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country
. Here, special
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tariffs
will benefit the
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country
providing
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food
as the import trades will
subsequently
increase due to scarcity.

On the other hand
, I would argue that increased tax on
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imported
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food
will not benefit the importing
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country
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sometimes
.
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Government
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impose
high
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tariffs
which
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ultimately
leads to inflation. In one
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country
rice may sold at 40 rupees per kilogram,
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but
if the same
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country
imports it to another
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country
, the price of rice may
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get
increased due to
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tariffs
on
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imported
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food
product.
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Ultimately
, the retail individual
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has to
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buy
it at higher price.

It is
clearly
understandable that importing
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tariffs
will not
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only
protect the farmers within the
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country
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but
also
tax collected as special
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tariffs
will benefit the
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country
.
On the contrary
, it will affect the retail individual as they might
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have to
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buy
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imported
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food
at higher price.
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IELTS essay Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
265 words
5.5
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