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My family have 4 peoples, is me, my parent and my grand. I always love them. Everyday i study hard, so when im sucsess, i cant see my past and rjfyajyafjtadjteaudtatdauatdtadyrsjyrsjyrsjaryjtarjtarjtaruatrkyktrakytekyktykrakaykateyktkeetkykateyktkayeytkaetyketyaketyyetakytdaadykdktyatdkyykdtdyatkytdkdytakduktakdtykytdyskdtkkdtsktdayktdykdaytkdytakydtkdyardkyraydrakdkrykydkdrykkkykRDkkYDykYTKDytdkaytdYTDkTDY5vtuklvuyfjjcfulfhctccfkcctlhktchtkjkfkjtfjtcjtcjjyfkktjffyffffffffylyfjjygygljlygjtgluftufjftlltflftjjylfyfjyfl
My family have 4 peoples, is me, my parent and my grand. I always
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love
them.
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
Everyday
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
study
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hard
,
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so
when
Possible spelling mistake found.
im
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sucsess
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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cant
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see
my past and
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IELTS essay Family and your futute…………..

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
30 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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