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Familes those who sending their children to private schools need not pay to support educarion system. Did you agree with this.

Familes those who sending their children to private schools need not pay to support educarion system. Did you agree with this. Ml96q
In the modern century education system is improving with the advanced technologies; however, some groups have an opinion that the parents those who sending their children to private institutions need not to be pay the state education supporting taxes. I completely disagree with this because it will decline the state economy and it does not help the needy children. this essay will discuss about this in detailly. Reduction in the tax payers causes the decline of the economy. Mostly in ever part of the world the government's backbone of income is from the education sector. When people do not pay the taxes this may leads to the destruction of that country in every field. For example, at the lockdown period Canada economy rate reduced to 10 percent than from last year because of the borders closed for international students. In short, reducing the money that getting from the education destruct the growth of the country. Morreover, the taxes helps the learning for the poor students. In every part of the world there will be childrens those who cannot afford the studies; however, the government gives them a free education through public schools. The government gets the money from the taxes for running the educational institution. If the taxes of people sending children to private schools get avoided then this may lead to the public education institutions closure. For instance, a same initiative that taken by the kenyan government reduced their literacy rate to below 20 percent. Therefore, by giving money to the government for motivating education system helps to get educate those who are needy. In conclusion, in the modern world the number of educators were raising, although some people argues that the parents those who sending thier children to private institutions should be avoided from the education supporting taxes. I completely disagree with this because it will destruct the economy of the nation and it reduces the chances of getting educated those who are needy.
In the modern century
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education
system is improving with the advanced technologies;
however
,
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some
groups have an opinion that the parents those
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sending their
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children
to private institutions need not
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to be
pay the state
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education
supporting
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taxes
. I completely disagree with this
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because
it will decline the state
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economy
and it does not
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help
the needy
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children
.
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this
essay will
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in
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detailly
.

Reduction in the
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tax
payers causes the decline of the
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economy
.
Mostly
in ever part of the world the
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government
's backbone of income is from the
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education
sector.
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When
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people
do not pay the
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this may leads to the destruction of that country in every field.
For example
, at the lockdown period Canada
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economy
rate
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reduced
to 10
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percent
than from last year
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because
of the borders closed for international students. In short, reducing the money that getting from the
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education
destruct the growth of the country.

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Morreover
, the
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taxes
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helps
the learning for the poor students. In every part of the world there will be
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childrens
those
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who
cannot afford the studies;
however
, the
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government
gives them a free
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education
through public schools. The
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government
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gets
the money from the
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taxes
for running the educational
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institution
. If the
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taxes
of
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people
sending
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children
to private schools
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get
avoided then this may lead to the public
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education
institutions closure.
For instance
, a same initiative that taken by the
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kenyan
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government
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reduced
their literacy rate to below 20 percent.
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, by giving money to the
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government
for motivating
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education
system
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helps
to
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get
educate those
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who
are needy.

In conclusion
, in the modern world the number of educators were raising, although
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some
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people
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argues
that the parents those
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who
sending
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thier
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children
to private institutions should
be avoided
from the
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education
supporting
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taxes
. I completely disagree with this
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because
it will destruct the
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economy
of the nation and it
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reduces
the chances of getting educated those
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who
are needy.

IELTS essay Familes those who sending their children to private schools need not pay to support educarion system. Did you agree with this.

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326 words
6.0
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